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文章要求大修，時(shí)間很緊，只有10天，但是問題不好回復(fù)，求助大牛給點(diǎn)建議. 已有3人參與
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具體情況說明： 文章涉及到的參數(shù)比較多，我們根據(jù)對文獻(xiàn)的分析及我們的實(shí)驗(yàn)條件，進(jìn)行了簡單的實(shí)驗(yàn)設(shè)計(jì)（談不上正交設(shè)計(jì)），但是得到了較好的實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)果。 現(xiàn)在一個(gè)評委要求對下面的問題進(jìn)行解釋。主要難點(diǎn)在于意見2和4。其中意見2本來就是基于有限的實(shí)驗(yàn)條件開展的結(jié)果，并沒有說要開展詳細(xì)的正交實(shí)驗(yàn)，也沒有對不同參數(shù)的等級(jí)進(jìn)行一個(gè)評價(jià)，這咋么辦？對于意見4，要求參考文獻(xiàn)中方法來對耦合的因素進(jìn)行解耦，感覺難度也不小。現(xiàn)在時(shí)間只剩下8天了，有點(diǎn)急。求求各位大牛給出好的辦法。 評審意見： xxxx. However, I have some major concerns that currently prevent me from recommending publication in this journal. I invite the author to give more proof regarding the experiment, presentation to justify their claims and explain the facts more precisely then it can be able to publish in the corresponding journal. Here are some major concerns: 1. The main issue is Table 1. The growth of the XXX depends on a complex parameter space and alters the entropy, enthalpy during the growth process. Hence, influences the structural properties. Here the author has chosen only four parameters (X1, X2, X3 and X4). I am surprised that how the author randomly decided these four parameters are most influential? How about the parameters like deposition pressure and substrate surface condition influences the structural and optical properties. 2. An orthogonal design method was used where the results are homogenous, and all third or higher order interactions are considered to be negligible. Here the author has used a simplified orthogonal experimental design method and performed ten experimental runs with four independent parameters with different levels . Could the author describe more briefly about this orthogonal design method and describe what algorithm he has used to find this sampling of 10 runs. Additionally, could he explain how he used deferent levels for the different parameters? 3. In Table 2, the author presents the fitted optical parameters of all the sample from S1 to S10. However, he did not mention the error bar of his fittings. Did the author compare the thickness of the sample from the fitted results with other measurements like XRR, line profile and AFM measurements? I do not understand why the author did not fix the thickness of all the sample deposited with different parameters by controlling the growth /deposition time and then compared their optical parameters? 4. The author only describes the effect of the main factors on the structural and optical properties of XXX. The author did not study how two independent parameters combined to effect the growth process and alter its optical and structural properties. Additionally, the author did not report any statistical study from its orthogonal design method. Therefore, I suggest the author study by a statistical method to study the complete influence of the single parameter or by the multiple parameters with a proper statistical analysis’s. The author can refer to some journal (. ACS Applied Materials & Interfaces, 10(17), 05 2018.) related the statistical study. |
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謝謝您的回復(fù)。 感覺這個(gè)評委是搞材料的，對我們文章的背景不是很清楚，因?yàn)橛泻芏囝愃频难芯窟h(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)沒有我們的實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)果和數(shù)據(jù)詳細(xì)。而且從意見1也可以看到這一點(diǎn)。 難道告訴他，我們只是根據(jù)對文獻(xiàn)的分析，并結(jié)合實(shí)際的實(shí)驗(yàn)條件，開展了簡單實(shí)驗(yàn)，并沒有嚴(yán)格按照正交實(shí)驗(yàn)的方法來做。 這樣能行嗎？感覺這個(gè)人很重視這個(gè)東西，而且有點(diǎn)對我們實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)果質(zhì)疑的想法。 |
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這樣回答肯定不行，比較好的回答，首先要感謝并肯定審稿人的工作和聯(lián)系，然后是你的方法跟審稿人建議的有什么區(qū)別，說明你的方法雖然簡單一些但是在實(shí)際應(yīng)用更普遍更有利于被更多人操作和接受，審稿人的建議很好，但是應(yīng)用上和你的并不太一樣，或者適用范圍不同，并引用一些文獻(xiàn)。語氣一定要謙虛誠懇，讓審稿人沒辦法拒絕你。 發(fā)自小木蟲IOS客戶端 |
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