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無名小冰冰金蟲 (著名寫手)
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求助check一下下面這句話的語法是否有問題? 已有2人參與
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| The comparison between the predicted results by SVM model and the calculated results obtained by numerical experiments demonstrates that a good agreement has been achieved. The research shows that the integrated model with SVM and GA proposed in this paper can predict longitudinal and transverse inherent shrinkage in a convenient and accurate way for the T-joint fillet welding within a certain range of welding parameters. |
金蟲 (著名寫手)
木蟲之王 (文學泰斗)
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| The comparison between the predicted result by SVM model and the calculated result obtained by the numerical computation demonstrates that a good agreement has been achieved. The research shows that the integrated model with SVM and GA proposed in this paper can predict both longitudinal and transverse inherent shrinkage in a convenient and accurate way for the T-joint fillet welding within a certain range of welding parameters. |
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描述好羅嗦啊,為什么不直接說模擬與實驗結果一致。二者一致那肯定是比較產物,不需要額外說明。 如果沿用當前句式,原句明顯有點頭重腳輕,不如直接改成the comparison showes a good agreement between the predicted results ... and the calculated results... . 此外,results by描述有些問題,個人感覺用某種手段研究問題時用by,而結果通?梢悦枋鰹閬碜杂/出自。。。,是不是應該用from呢。出自計算和實驗的結果,results from simulation/experiments是不是好一點;蛘咧苯訉懗蒘VM results,experimental results。 后句2種手段如果是各自適用一個方向的話就加個seperately,如果是通用的,可以考慮加個both。 |
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