求大神指點(diǎn)我的自我介紹
非常有幸去參加某大學(xué)的夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，要求有個(gè)英文版的自我介紹。我寫了寫，跪求大神指點(diǎn)指點(diǎn)，比如長(zhǎng)短、內(nèi)容等不合適的地方
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原來(lái)你是河北邯鄲的呀 哈哈
額 你這是要口頭介紹 還是要書面的？ 如果是口語(yǔ)那就沒(méi)關(guān)系 不過(guò)書面的話這個(gè)全文語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題不是一般的多 要改還不如重寫 大學(xué)四六級(jí)不考作文么
Hello, my name is ___
It's certainly been a pleasure meeting you all here
My hometown is Handan, a city __方向__ of Beijing, a city rich in history as it was once the capital of Zhao, one of seven Waring States some 260 years before Christ
(秦始皇之前諸候紛紛自稱為王, 王國(guó) = kingdom)
(下兩句話不需改)
The Internet of Things refers to a soon-to-be fact of life whereby web-enabled "smart" appliances routinely talk to one another
(下一句話不需改) ( ... = 不需改)
... I'm a funny girl
I live by the motto "..." so I work very hard in college...
I learned well and won Second Prize when the national University Students "Challenge Cup" contest was held at my school.
My goal is becoming a graduate student in one of China's prestigious universities
I enjoy traveling in my spare time...
However, this is my first time to southern China, specifically Hangzhou...
I like being with friends and reminiscing our happy and sad moments together.
My roommates are always surprised how many friends say "Hello" to me while we wall through campus
I hope to be fast friends with all of you
That’s all, thank you very much
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