小弟寫了一篇英語作文,想提升下水平,請各位幫忙批改!菜鳥一枚,感激不盡
Will E-book Replace Traditional Book?
“Have you ever read an E-book?”If someone ask you this question,the answer may be solitary.”Certainly I have”.In the past ten years, great changes are taking place around us.Everyone can download whatever he wants in the internet.And thereby,the style of read also vary a lot.Currently,it’s always reported that”The popularity of E-book is overwhelming ”.
Given to an investigation about the way of reading , the majority of people strictly cling to the point that “Traditional book will finally be instead by E-book”.Why are they so sure about this?They list three reasons as follows.Frist of all, the cost would be reduced significantly if the E-Book is general used, both to the publishers and the readers.Because the price of E-book may be less than one-tenth of the traditional one.What’s more, no more wood will be used in making paper-book.Secondly,E-book is so portable that you can read it in anytime,or anywhere,just equipped with a laptop or cellphone.Finally,the way to acquire the knowledge is rather simple and rapid than that of triditional one.You only need to click the mouse instead of borrowing it from library or buying it from the shop.
As to me,I believe the traditional books have done great contribution to the civilization of human.However,it gets bare virtue compared with the E-book.Consequently,I think it is the the development of the world that the traditional book is to be replaced by E-book.
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把自己寫的發(fā)上來,支持。本人沒有這個勇氣
我看到兩處generally used , be used to,
比如這句:the style of read also vary a lot 應(yīng)改為 the styles of reading also vary a lot 較好。后面有時間再幫你看
我這不是求提高么~接受批評提升才快些
這個主題 考研英語作文書上有。。。
1 someone ask 應(yīng)該是asks
2 英語“,”后一般空一格
3 Everyone can download whatever he wants in the internet. download后一般加sth 另,on the Internet
4 They list three reasons as follows建議改為There are three reasons listed as follows.
5 Frist of all, the cost would be reduced significantly if the E-Book is general used, both to the publishers and the readers.
is generally used,10樓已有的
frist拼寫錯誤,改為first。 另此句尾應(yīng)用“,”下一句Because小寫并入這一句保持句子的完整性。
6 As to me,I believe the traditional books have done great contribution to the civilization of human.
Contribute 這里的用法有點奇怪,可以直接說 have greatly contributed to,
謝謝,有心了