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" Tea or coffee? " is a question that is often asked by dinner-eaters. Many western people may choose coffee, while Chinese people could choose tea. As is said that an emperor of China discovered tea and used it to cure diseases. During the Ming and Qing Dynasties, tea houses spred around our country. Tea drinking spred into Japan in the sixth century, but it didn't spred into Europe and America until the 18 century. Today, tea is one of the most popular drinks all over the world. Tea is the most important things of China and the important component of Chinese tradition and culture.
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1. asked by dinner-eaters？？？你確定是吃的人問（當(dāng)然這個(gè)dinner-eaters表達(dá)也很嚇人�。�
2. As is said that an emperor of China discovered tea。。。。。。 spred around our country（第三旁觀者變成了第一人稱）
3. tea houses spred 。。。。。。Tea drinking spred 。。。。。。 tea is。。。。
典型中式表達(dá)：
dinner-eaters，
Tea drinking
Tea is the most important things
先把這些改掉，其他的毛病是句子和語(yǔ)法的問題，自己小心一點(diǎn)大概能改對(duì)，