求修改句子 該怎么表達(dá)呢
A total of 17 amino acids were determined , which mainly contained Gly, Arg, Leu, Lys, Asp et al.
A total of 17 amino acids were determined , and among them Gly, Arg, Leu, Lys, Asp were the main types.
這兩種說(shuō)法正確嗎 哪種更準(zhǔn)確呢?坐等 謝謝
返回小木蟲(chóng)查看更多
今日熱帖
京公網(wǎng)安備 11010802022153號(hào)
都不對(duì),問(wèn)題出在措辭是典型的中式表達(dá)。第一句為下面這么多詞都可以用什么用contain,第二句非常 awkward 母語(yǔ)的人決不會(huì)這么寫句子
which were:
dominated by
mainly composed of
mainly comprised of
mainly constituted of
mainly made up of
is mainly of
is mainly of ---不小心堆積出錯(cuò)
,
第一句語(yǔ)法正確,但似乎有點(diǎn)中國(guó)人感覺(jué)。第二句語(yǔ)法有點(diǎn)問(wèn)題,英語(yǔ)中兩個(gè)句子沒(méi)有逗號(hào),如果需要,則添加并列連接詞,或者使用從句結(jié)構(gòu)
直接把定語(yǔ)從句插進(jìn)句子里,或者添加一個(gè)插入語(yǔ)不就完了
樓主的用詞是不對(duì),使得句子含意顯得不準(zhǔn)確。如果我來(lái)寫的話,會(huì)選擇簡(jiǎn)單清晰的表述,比如:
17 amino acids have been assessed. Each has Gly, Arg, Leu, Lys, Asp and other 3 fatty acids as major components.