求助check一下下面這句話的語法是否有問題？
The comparison between the predicted results by SVM model and the calculated results obtained by numerical experiments demonstrates that a good agreement has been achieved. The research shows that the integrated model with SVM and GA proposed in this paper can predict longitudinal and transverse inherent shrinkage in a convenient and accurate way for the T-joint fillet welding within a certain range of welding parameters.
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The comparison between the predicted result by SVM model and the calculated result obtained by the numerical computation demonstrates that a good agreement has been achieved. The research shows that the integrated model with SVM and GA proposed in this paper can predict both longitudinal and transverse inherent shrinkage in a convenient and accurate way for the T-joint fillet welding within a certain range of welding parameters.
描述好羅嗦啊，為什么不直接說模擬與實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)果一致。二者一致那肯定是比較產(chǎn)物，不需要額外說明。
如果沿用當(dāng)前句式，原句明顯有點(diǎn)頭重腳輕，不如直接改成the comparison showes a good agreement between the predicted results ... and the calculated results... .
此外，results by描述有些問題，個(gè)人感覺用某種手段研究問題時(shí)用by，而結(jié)果通�？梢悦枋鰹閬碜杂�/出自。。。，是不是應(yīng)該用from呢。出自計(jì)算和實(shí)驗(yàn)的結(jié)果，results from simulation/experiments是不是好一點(diǎn)。或者直接寫成SVM results，experimental results。
后句2種手段如果是各自適用一個(gè)方向的話就加個(gè)seperately，如果是通用的，可以考慮加個(gè)both。
我也不知道，開始用的from，后來改成了by，樓上那位大神用的是by，我感覺他的也沒錯(cuò)。這些個(gè)專業(yè)語句是很麻煩，一長串才能表達(dá)一點(diǎn)意思。
by是你自己的詞，他沒改。你一個(gè)有obtained一個(gè)沒有他也沒改。
語句太羅嗦了，讀起來是很累的。羅嗦與專業(yè)是兩碼事。
主語搞了一堆修飾語別人讀著讀著都忘記主語是誰了，所以盡量不要把修飾語放在前邊，最好分離出來。
英語中對比的時(shí)候貌似喜歡用compared with A，B... ， comparison between A and B不常見，因?yàn)檎娴奶L了。
results與from連用較多。常見的引用別人圖片時(shí)不就用的from么。
result by真沒見過
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