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1. 中：計(jì)算結(jié)果 問(wèn)：是Calculation result還是Calculated results。進(jìn)一步說(shuō)，Accumulation calculation results是否應(yīng)該寫為calculation results of accumulation ? 2. 中：每個(gè)試驗(yàn)件要失效時(shí)的累積損傷（accumulative fatigue damage） 問(wèn)：是翻譯為the accumulative fatigue damage when the specimen reaches its failure還是the accumulative fatigue damage of each specimen when it reaches failure 3. 英：A, B, C, D and E are five commonly used accumulative damage models in the multiaxial accumulative fatigue damage calculation. Therefore, for sake of comparison, they are also selected in this paper to calculate the accumulative fatigue damage sum. The five models are briefly reviewed in the following. 問(wèn)：上面這段話有問(wèn)題嗎？審稿人在邊上打了一個(gè)差，但沒(méi)說(shuō)為什么…… 4. 中：這里得到與A模型(A-Law)差不多相同的均值和標(biāo)準(zhǔn)差并不奇怪 英：it is not surprising to get almost same mean values and standard deviations compared with those A-Law. 問(wèn)：這樣說(shuō)對(duì)嗎？特別是句尾的那個(gè)those 。我本來(lái)沒(méi)有寫those，但是審稿人加了一個(gè)those在哪里 5.中：從階段A（Stage-A）到階段B（Stage-B)的轉(zhuǎn)換速率被C影響 英：the switching speeding from Stage-A to Stage-B was affected by C 問(wèn)：這樣可以嗎？有更好的選擇嗎 6. 英：Therefore, by using these XX to construct YY, only the variation of loading path would have an impact on the fatigue damage accumulation. The effect caused by the variation of A could be eliminated. 問(wèn)：上面這段話有問(wèn)題嗎？審稿人在邊上也打了一個(gè)差 |
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1、二者都可以用。Accumulation calculation results可改為：Accumulated calculation results. 2、accumulative fatigue damage這種說(shuō)法存在嗎？好像更改說(shuō)成：cumulative fatigue damage或者accumulated fatigue damage 另外，the accumulative fatigue damage when the specimen reaches its failure和the accumulative fatigue damage of each specimen when it reaches failure都不是完整的句子（也許你沒(méi)有給出完整句子）。不考慮此因素外，我認(rèn)為前后兩種說(shuō)法都是可以的，但后者更有強(qiáng)調(diào)之意味。 3、在我看來(lái)還是與前面兩個(gè)問(wèn)題一樣，不該用accumulative，該用cumulative或accumulated；另外，for sake of comparison應(yīng)該為 for the sake of comparison。 4、it is not surprising to get almost THE same mean values and standard deviations AS compared with those OF A-Law. 5、the switching RATES (or SPEED) from Stage-A to Stage-B was affected by C 6、前面將would have改為has或had（結(jié)論或討論時(shí)不會(huì)用would吧); 后面改為：The effect of the variation of A could be eliminated. |
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