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請幫忙潤色一句英文, 謝謝
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| The effective distribution coefficient of X decreases with the increase of [Y] in the melts, while the effective distribution coefficients of A and B increase as [Y] increases in the melts, which are less than 1.(漢語意思是X的分凝系數(shù)隨著原料中的Y增加而降低,A和B 的分凝系數(shù)隨著Y的增加而增加,且三者的分凝系數(shù)均低于1) |
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The effective distribution coefficient decreases for X and increases for A and B with the increase of [Y] in the melts. In all cases, the effective distribution coefficients are less than 1. |
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這里我感覺其實(shí)不是英語本身的問題了(單從字面上看是沒有實(shí)質(zhì)性問題的),而是這種看似正確的語言卻不能給讀者清晰、準(zhǔn)確的信息。問題主要在于最后一句話which are less than 1。 乍看上去,這里的which到底是只向什么?可以是Y,但Y是一樣的?還是不同?一樣的怎么會用復(fù)數(shù)?其實(shí)也可以是effective distribution coefficient,這顯然是不一樣的,用復(fù)數(shù)是自然的。結(jié)論是交代有些混亂。 因?yàn)橹貜?fù)的東西較多,可以考慮合并敘述如下: The effective distribution coefficient decreases for X and increases for A and B with the increase of [Y] in the melts. In all cases, Y is less than 1. |
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