8樓: Originally posted by okjack_chen at 2016-06-13 15:37:26
those who indulge themselves in the Internet should cast sight onto the friendship and kinship in real life

7樓: Originally posted by mac194 at 2016-06-13 09:28:55
People who overindulge in internet activities                  
  should get more involved with friends and loves ones
           ^
    OR   find time to be with .... more often

  cast = 拋
   ...

3樓: Originally posted by kitos at 2016-06-12 23:06:11
也許themselves可以省去。

4樓: Originally posted by swordzheng at 2016-06-13 07:44:22
indulged

5樓: Originally posted by vbxn at 2016-06-13 08:53:46
Those who indulge themselves with the Internet should cast their eye over the friendship and kinship in real life.

6樓: Originally posted by vbxn at 2016-06-13 08:57:08
把in換成with, 把eyesight改成eye, 把to改成over.