Thank you for submitting your manuscript to xxxxx. After careful evaluation, while I find the topic of the manuscript appropriate for the journal I regret to inform you that the level of English throughout your manuscript does not meet the journal's required standard, and I must therefore reject it.

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We appreciate you submitting your manuscript to xxxxx and thank you for giving us the opportunity to consider your work. We hope that you re-submit after English editing.

編輯當(dāng)時的回復(fù)，然后就送去Elsevier潤色了，但感覺潤色并沒有整體提高寫作水平，只修改了以下三點：

1. 把我當(dāng)時覺得可以用一般現(xiàn)在時表達(dá)的一般性result，改成了過去式
2. 加了一些定冠詞the
3. 替換部分用詞，且很多都是重復(fù)的替換

而對于句子的連接，以及母語者的表達(dá)習(xí)慣方面，完全沒有任何改動，Elsevier的潤色都是這樣嗎，這樣是合理的嗎？投過去擔(dān)心仍然會因為語言問題被拒。 返回小木蟲查看更多