Thank you for submitting your manuscript to xxxxx. After careful evaluation, while I find the topic of the manuscript appropriate for the journal I regret to inform you that the level of English throughout your manuscript does not meet the journal's required standard, and I must therefore reject it.

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編輯當(dāng)時(shí)的回復(fù)，然后就送去Elsevier潤(rùn)色了，但感覺潤(rùn)色并沒有整體提高寫作水平，只修改了以下三點(diǎn)：

1. 把我當(dāng)時(shí)覺得可以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表達(dá)的一般性result，改成了過去式
2. 加了一些定冠詞the
3. 替換部分用詞，且很多都是重復(fù)的替換

而對(duì)于句子的連接，以及母語者的表達(dá)習(xí)慣方面，完全沒有任何改動(dòng)，Elsevier的潤(rùn)色都是這樣嗎，這樣是合理的嗎？投過去擔(dān)心仍然會(huì)因?yàn)檎Z言問題被拒。 返回小木蟲查看更多