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Four special FBG based sensors were developed to monitor an artificial landslide, which is located in Nanjing, China. Based on the strength of the rod sensor, two sensors were named as “hard sensors” (No.1 and No.2), the other two were named as “soft sensors” (No.3 and No.4). For Two FBG were fixed on a rod for each sensor, one is 50 centimeters from the top of rod (upper FBG), and another is 100 centimeters from the top of rod (lower FBG). In the experiment of this paper, four special sensors were installed in the slope of artificial landslide, which was made by machine and manual excavation. A sensing system including four special sensors, optical fiber, static fiber grating demodulation instrument (SM125), PC and related software were integrated in fiber sensing system. And a large number of strain data can be collected by using this system during artificial landslide experiment in this study. The results of this research show that the lower FBGs are more sensitive than the upper FBGs among the four sensors. The Sensor No.2 and No.4 are more capable of monitoring small-scale landslide than Sensor No.1 and No.3. Due to the difference in strength, hard sensors are more adaptable to coarse environment for big landslide. Thus, hard sensors should be installed near the landslide are while in a distance to landslide body for soft sensors. In addition, a clear tendency of strain variation can be monitored by soft sensors, which will be used in landslide prediction and hazard alarm. 看看句式能不能調節(jié)下，連接詞有沒有什么好的替換？謝謝�。�！  |
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第一句：制作四個基于FBG的傳感器，用于檢測人工滑坡，地點位于中國南京。 第二句：基于傳感器桿子的剛性，兩個傳感器被命名為硬質傳感器，其余兩個為軟傳感器。 第三句：每個傳感器都有兩個FBG固定在上面，一個距離桿子頂端50cm，另一距離為100cm。 第四句：在論文的實驗中，四個特制的傳感器被安裝在一個準備進行人工滑坡的斜坡上，滑坡是通過機器和人工挖掘產生的。（這句感覺翻譯的最差） 第五句：一個傳感系統(tǒng)包含四個特質傳感器，光纖，靜態(tài)解調儀，PC和相應的軟件，他們都被集成在一起。 第六句：研究的結果表明：低FBG比高FBG具有更好的敏感性，對于四個傳感器都是如此。傳感器2和4比1和3更能監(jiān)測到小的滑坡。 第七句：估計其剛性的不容，硬質傳感器適用于更粗放的環(huán)境，用以監(jiān)測大的滑坡。 第八句：因此，硬質傳感需要需要安裝在距離滑坡比較近的地方，而軟質的需要距離遠一些。 第九句：此外，由軟質傳感器監(jiān)測得到的應變變化趨勢，可能用于滑坡預報和災害預警。 |
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第一句：制作四個基于FBG的傳感器，用于檢測人工滑坡，地點位于中國南京。 第二句：基于傳感器桿子的剛性，兩個傳感器被命名為硬質傳感器，其余兩個為軟傳感器。 第三句：每個傳感器都有兩個FBG固定在上面，一個距離桿子頂端50cm，另一距離為100cm。 第四句：在論文的實驗中，四個特制的傳感器被安裝在一個準備進行人工滑坡的斜坡上，滑坡是通過機器和人工挖掘產生的。（這句感覺翻譯的最差） 第五句：一個傳感系統(tǒng)包含四個特質傳感器，光纖，靜態(tài)解調儀，PC和相應的軟件，他們都被集成在一起。 第六句：研究的結果表明：低FBG比高FBG具有更好的敏感性，對于四個傳感器都是如此。傳感器2和4比1和3更能監(jiān)測到小的滑坡。 第七句：估計其剛性的不容，硬質傳感器適用于更粗放的環(huán)境，用以監(jiān)測大的滑坡。 第八句：因此，硬質傳感需要需要安裝在距離滑坡比較近的地方，而軟質的需要距離遠一些。 第九句：此外，由軟質傳感器監(jiān)測得到的應變變化趨勢，可能用于滑坡預報和災害預警。 Four special FBG based sensors were developed to monitor an artificial landslide, which is located in Nanjing, China. Based on the strength of the rod sensor, two sensors were named as “hard sensors” (No.1 and No.2), the other two were named as “soft sensors” (No.3 and No.4). For Two FBG were fixed on a rod for each sensor, one is 50 centimeters from the top of rod (upper FBG), and another is 100 centimeters from the top of rod (lower FBG). In the experiment of this paper, four special sensors were installed in the slope of artificial landslide, which was made by machine and manual excavation. A sensing system including four special sensors, optical fiber, static fiber grating demodulation instrument (SM125), PC and related software were integrated in fiber sensing system. And a large number of strain data can be collected by using this system during artificial landslide experiment in this study. The results of this research show that the lower FBGs are more sensitive than the upper FBGs among the four sensors. The Sensor No.2 and No.4 are more capable of monitoring small-scale landslide than Sensor No.1 and No.3. Due to the difference in strength, hard sensors are more adaptable to coarse environment for big landslide. Thus, hard sensors should be installed near the landslide are while in a distance to landslide body for soft sensors. In addition, a clear tendency of strain variation can be monitored by soft sensors, which will be used in landslide prediction and hazard alarm. 試改如下，謹供參考。 Four FBG based sensors were developed to monitor an artificial landslide located in Nanjing, China. Based on the strength of their rod, two sensors were named as “hard sensors” (No.1 and No.2), the other two as “soft sensors” (No.3 and No.4). Two FBGs were fixed on (the rod of) each sensor, 50 cm and 100 cm from the top of the rod, respectively (upper FBG and lower FBG). The sensors were installed in the slope to be (artificial) slided by machine and manual excavation. The sensing system included four special sensors, optical fiber, static fiber grating demodulation instrument (SM125), PC and related software. (And a large number of strain data can be collected by using this system during artificial landslide experiment in this study.) The results of this study showed that the lower FBGs were more sensitive than the upper ones (among the four sensors). The Sensor No.2 and No.4 were more capable of monitoring small-scale landslide than Sensor No.1 and No.3 (為什么？). (Due to the difference in strength,) the hard sensors are more suitable to hard environment of big landslide （不知文中有否證據(jù)？). Thus, hard sensors should be fixed near the landslide while the soft ones farer from the landslide. In addition, a clear tendency of strain variation can be detected by the soft sensors, which may be used in landslide prediction and hazard alarm. |
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