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請(qǐng)問(wèn)這句話有語(yǔ)病嗎？ Based on above three considerations, Figures 6 and 7 show size-dependent point depression versus reciprocal particle diameter for Al and Bi nanoparticles in comparison to available experimental results, respectively. |
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不知道具體的語(yǔ)境哈 這樣寫不知道是否改變了原意 Based on the three considerations mentioned above, experimental results shown in Figures 6 and 7 reveal size-dependent point depression versus reciprocal particle diameter for Al and Bi nanoparticles, respectively. |
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| well, you may have a few points to say, but that's not good to make such a long sentence, especially the arrangement is not appropriate. besides, your meaning is not clear, "based on some considersation" then you need to "compare with some experimental results", which one is the major consideration? so I would suggest you to make it into some simple sentences first, then combine them if you feel necessarily. |
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語(yǔ)境是這樣的： To investigate effect of the bulk experimental values on the melting point depression, we take into account three factors that affect the melting point of nanostructured materials according to Eqs. (2) - (10): (a) neglecting the temperature dependence of surface free energy alone, i.e. assuming constant surface free energy as most researchers do; (b) neglecting the temperature dependence of molar volume alone; (c) assuming equal molar volume for solid and liquid as Kim et al. do. Based on above three considerations, Figures 6 and 7 show..... 請(qǐng)問(wèn)我這樣表述可以嗎？ |
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我的原意是這樣的： To investigate effect of the bulk experimental values on the melting point depression, we take into account three factors that affect the melting point of nanostructured materials according to Eqs. (2) - (10): (a) neglecting the temperature dependence of surface free energy alone, i.e. assuming constant surface free energy as most researchers do; (b) neglecting the temperature dependence of molar volume alone; (c) assuming equal molar volume for solid and liquid as Kim et al. do. Based on above three considerations, Figures 6 and 7 show...... 請(qǐng)問(wèn)上面的表述有問(wèn)題嗎？象大多數(shù)人一樣，“as most researchers do”，可以這樣翻譯嗎？ |
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你是太“忠于”中文原意了，我看把分句“Based on...”直接去掉不就完了嗎？是摘要吧？先說(shuō)了三點(diǎn)假設(shè)/考慮，再直接說(shuō)實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)果，這不挺好的嗎？ 至于你那沒(méi)把握的“as most researchers do”，我建議還是當(dāng)它是雞肋——扔了！不影響你的真實(shí)意思的表達(dá)嘛，是不是？何苦再糾結(jié)呢？ |
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