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1) There are many instances of badly constructed sentences. E.g. "It was found that XLE bleaching sequnece was the suitable sequnece of laccase and xylanase synergitic biobleaching It was shown by SEM that xylanase pretreatment increased the accessibility of laccased to residual lignin and facilitated to remove lignin. ", "For a specific target brightness level of over 80% ISO, XL pretreatment can save as 40% H2O2 cost while the visicosity increased 6.7% compared with QP bleaching sequence", " It was also found that synergetic biobleaching not only decreases the bleaching chemicals but also has a good selectivity and bleachability.", "Bleaching sequneces involving laccase(L) and xylanase(X) were used to bleach oxygen-delignified wheat straw pullp. ", "TCF sequences include oxygen, hydrogen peroxide and ozone are based stages " and "The use of xylanases (X) can enhances the bleaching effect of chemical reagents and
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Originally posted by wxwxyh at 2011-03-01 11:54:03:
You are welcome to resubmit your paper after a very careful revision as a new submission, making sure that every aspect of the manuscript is in accordance with the author guidelines. This should in ...

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It was found that XLE bleaching sequnece  was  the  suitable  sequnece  of  laccase  and  xylanase  synergitic biobleaching
我覺(jué)得這句話可以改成It was found that XLE bleaching sequnece  was suitable  for laccase  and  xylanase  synergitic biobleaching

It  was  shown  by  SEM  that  xylanase  pretreatment  increased  the accessibility  of  laccased  to  residual  lignin  and  facilitated  to  remove  lignin.
改成：It was shown from SEM observation that  xylanase  pretreatment increased the accessibility of laccased  to  residual lignin and facilitated removal of lignin.

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For a  specific  target brightness  level of over 80%  ISO, XL pretreatment can  save as 40% H2O2 cost while  the visicosity  increased 6.7% compared with QP bleaching sequence
改成For a  specific  target brightness  level of over 80% ISO, XL pretreatment can  save 40% H2O2  and increase the viscosity to 6.7% compared with QP bleaching sequence

It was  also  found  that  synergetic  biobleaching  not  only  decreases  the bleaching chemicals but also has a good selectivity and bleachability
改成It was  also  found  that  synergetic  biobleaching  not  only  decreases  the bleaching chemicals but also has the advantages of  good selectivity and bleachability

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wxwxyh(金幣+4): 2011-03-01 21:28:11
wxwxyh(金幣+5): 2011-03-23 10:04:30

你的英語(yǔ)水平確實(shí)不咋地。單說(shuō)這句“The use of xylanases (X) can enhances  the bleaching effect of chemical reagents and decrease chemical consumption”， can后應(yīng)接enhance原型，而不是enhances。拋開can后面接什么動(dòng)詞不談，共用一個(gè)主語(yǔ)的and前后連接的動(dòng)詞形式（在這里指的是單復(fù)數(shù)）也不一致！這句話至少應(yīng)該是：
The use of xylanases (X) can enhance  the bleaching effect of chemical reagents and decrease chemical consumption。
我不懂你的專業(yè)，我覺(jué)得應(yīng)該還要有sth effects on sth，所以上句進(jìn)一步表達(dá)為：The use of xylanases (X) can enhance  the bleaching effect of chemical reagents on ··· and decrease chemical consumption。
粗淺之見，僅供參考！

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可不可以問(wèn)一句什么雜志？

journal of biotechnology，建議我去找elesiver的語(yǔ)言服務(wù)

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