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請幫忙修改一下這段英文，一個親戚的小孩要參加兒童英語比賽
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| My favorite food I like many good food: fish 、cake、candy、milk、fruits、 egg …… I like fish,because it's beautiful and yummy (美味的;香噴噴的).I have much milk everyday.Milk is alibility. It can make me tall. I eat many kinds of fruits. They are pears, watermelons, apples, bananas, strawberries and so on. But I like strawberries best. Strawberries look beautiful and taste very nice . specially,my grandmother usually buys strawberries to me. In one word, fruits are good for our health . But I don’t like vegetables. In future I’ll eat more and more vegetables. What do you like? Thank you! |
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econy(金幣+3, 翻譯EPI+1): good 2011-05-19 21:02:12
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My favorite food I like many good food: fish 、cake、candy、milk、fruits、 egg …… I like fish,because it's （beautiful and這個去掉吧？感覺魚用來吃好像和美麗沒啥關(guān)系吧？） yummy (美味的;香噴噴的). I （have much=drink）milk everyday. Milk is alibility（沒看明白這句話要說什么）. It can make me tall. I eat many kinds of fruits （. They are=just like） pears, watermelons, apples, bananas, strawberries and so on. (s都可以去掉，減輕孩子負擔，省的某個忘加了)But I like strawberries best. Strawberries look beautiful and taste very nice. （specially=especially）,my grandmother usually buys strawberries （to=for） me. In （one=可以改為a，好記一些，但這樣用也行） word, fruits are good for our health . But I don’t like vegetables. （So）In future I’ll eat more and more vegetables. What do you like? Thank you! 還有一點兒，lz沒有說清楚是多大的小孩子。盡量是小孩子覺得簡單好記，順口就行，只要沒有大的語法錯誤就行 |
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econy(金幣+5): better 2011-05-19 21:02:22
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My favorite food I like many good food: fish 、cake、candy、milk、fruits（我覺得這個s可以去掉）、 egg …… I like fish,because it's （beautiful and這個去掉吧？感覺魚用來吃好像和美麗沒啥關(guān)系吧？可以換個nutrient） yummy (美味的;香噴噴的). I （have much=drink）milk everyday. Milk can make me strong and tall. I eat many kinds of fruits （. They are=just like） pears, watermelons, apples, bananas, strawberries and so on. (s都可以去掉，減輕孩子負擔，省的某個忘加了) But I like strawberries（用單數(shù)吧，9歲的孩子容易忘） best. Strawberries look beautiful and taste very nice. （specially=especially）,my grandmother usually buys strawberries （to=for） me. In （one=可以改為a，好記一些，但這樣用也行） word, fruits are good for our health. But （what a pity,）I don’t like vegetables. （So）In future I (’ll=must,這個詞好記而且標明了自己的決心)eat more and more vegetables. What do you like?（這句話放這兒感覺沒啥用吧） Thank you! 這些詞都蠻簡單的，9歲的孩子應該都能記��！~ [ Last edited by Mally89 on 2011-5-19 at 20:27 ] |
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