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In addition, the investigation of UV-Vis spectral properties of the free ligands (a-Hptt, a-Hmtt) and complexes 1~8 show that UV-Vis spectral peak of complexes and ligands are much the same. At room temperature, the fluorescent properties of the complexes and ligands have been observed in the solid state, the interesting results indicate that the metal ions and the anions could affect the complexes structures, to move forward a single step, the fluorescence peak positions and the fluorescence intensity are changed with the change of the complexes structures. Furthermore, the thermal properties of complexes 1, 4, 5 and 7 have been investigated, the results show that complex 7 is more stabile than the other complexes (1,4,5), it is stable up to 190°C. The ligand a-ptt has free N atoms of complex 1, so we consider studying its copper adsorption property. The replacement content is determined by IR, elementary analysis and SEM-EDS. Furthermore, we investagation a catalysis process of the oxidative coupling of 2,6-dimethylphenol (DMP) under the reaction conditions by using complex 1 and its replacement content. |
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在這里有個英文文章潤色軟件�？梢哉页鑫恼轮械钠磳懞驼Z法錯誤，不知對你有沒有用 http://www.gaoyang168.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=3211497 |
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就語法規(guī)范提出點意見哈： show 要改為shows，因為investigation 是單數(shù) the complexes structures中的complexes要去掉s，因為名詞修飾名詞，除幾個例外，都應該用單數(shù) stable 的拼寫錯誤 investigation改成動詞形式 catalysis 改成形容詞形式catalytic 此外，第一段中除第一句以外，后面部分的斷句有問題，如to move 那應該是另一個句子了，to就該變成To。 建議如果不用連接詞啊之類的，就使用分號隔開吧。最好就是多使用復合句式，使句子更加緊湊，表達更簡潔。 |
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