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[求助] 誰能幫我看看審稿人提出的語法問題，引號的時文章的句子，就是有問題的

Introduction: … bulk intrinsic defects showed the visible light response…
p.1 line 17: “… called this doped TiO2 as the second generation…”
p.1 line 40: “So, we wonder how to prepare a TIO2 with …”
p.1 line 84: “… but why it has no photocatalytic activity? At one time, we thought that if this phenomenon was possibly resulted from the strong photo-luminescence (PL) of novel TiO2 (A) under visible light. However, this doubt was denied after the transient IR absorption spectra of both P25-TiO2 and novel TiO2 (A) were determined.”
p.2 line 30:”… can’t, what’s the reason?”
p.2 line 43:”… that there must have electrons traps on TiO2 surface,…”

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wolfmanhd(金幣+10, 翻譯EPI+1): ★★★★★最佳答案 2012-01-13 11:43:52

p.1 line 17: “… called this doped TiO2 as the second generation…”
修改后：“… called this doped TiO2 the second generation…”

p.1 line 40: “So, we wonder how to prepare a TIO2 with …”
修改后：“So, we wonder how to prepare TIO2 with …”3

p.1 line 84: “… but why it has no photocatalytic activity? At one time, we thought that if this phenomenon was possibly resulted from the strong photo-luminescence (PL) of novel TiO2 (A) under visible light. However, this doubt was denied after the transient IR absorption spectra of both P25-TiO2 and novel TiO2 (A) were determined.”
修改后：“… but why doesn’t it have photocatalytic activity? At one time, we thought whether this phenomenon was possibly resulted from the strong photo-luminescence (PL) of novel TiO2 (A) under visible light. However, this thought was denied after the transient IR absorption spectra of both P25-TiO2 and novel TiO2 (A) were determined.”【注：doubt本義指不相信其后面引導的命題，e.g.：I doubt that you are a good guy.就是說我不認為你是好人。suspect恰恰相反。所以，用suspect代替thought也成�！�

p.2 line 30:”… can’t, what’s the reason?”
修改后：”… can’t ***. What’s the reason?”【can’t后內容不全，一個簡單句不能出現(xiàn)2個謂語結構。故拆成兩個句子，請根據(jù)內容補充***部分】

p.2 line 43:”… that there must have electrons traps on TiO2 surface,…”
修改后：”… that there must be electrons traps on TiO2 surface,…”

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