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寫摘要的時(shí)候,跟老板有幾點(diǎn)意見不一樣。求各位不吝賜教,幫幫忙。 1、摘要第一句: 我原來(lái)是這樣寫的:A detecting approach for **** named xxxx was described in this paper. 老板力推:We developed a detecting approach of **** named xxxx.(這里是句號(hào),后面沒(méi)有了。) 我總覺得老板的這句話像說(shuō)了半截,沒(méi)有下文,感覺讀起來(lái)怪怪的,而且摘要不是一般不能用第一人稱來(lái)寫嗎?但是老板發(fā)給我一片文獻(xiàn),摘要第一句話確實(shí)是這樣寫的:We developed……,但人家后面還跟了一句which has……呀,我總覺得我那句要好點(diǎn)兒,但是老板說(shuō)我的不好,不能用。 2、摘要中間: 原來(lái)的被刪減。后來(lái)老板改成:Overcoming the obstacle that PLA can not be used for the magnification of antigen-antibody binding signals in small molecular detection, because of two antibodies are unable to combine to one small molecule due to its small molecular structure. The limit of detection (LOD) in this assay was 10-50 folds lower than ELISA. (1) 這句話的前面一句是講我們實(shí)驗(yàn)的原理,因?yàn)榫渥佑悬c(diǎn)長(zhǎng)了,我就用了分號(hào),接下來(lái)寫overcoming the obstacle that……,但是老板說(shuō)英文中不能用分號(hào),將overcoming開頭改成了大寫,我總覺得這句話是接著上面一句寫的,開頭不能用大寫,而且英文里面可以用分號(hào)的吧?求牛人指點(diǎn)。 (2)我覺得句子有點(diǎn)繁瑣了。我想將“the magnification of antigen-antibody binding signals in ”去掉,因?yàn)樗旧砭褪切揎桺LA的,老板說(shuō)不可以。 (3)我總覺得because of 前面不能加逗號(hào),老板說(shuō)可以。 (4)我想,既然我前面描述實(shí)驗(yàn)原理的句子有點(diǎn)長(zhǎng)了,后面一句話要是開頭用大寫,我可不可以寫成:Because two antibodies are unable to combine to one small molecule due to its small molecular structure,therefore xxxx(我們實(shí)驗(yàn)的名稱) overcoming the obstacle that PLA can not be used in small molecular detection, and the limit of detection (LOD) in this assay was 10-50 folds lower than ELISA. 啰啰嗦嗦寫了一大堆,謝謝各位耐心幫我看了。還請(qǐng)各位指點(diǎn)迷津。提前祝各位新年快樂(lè)了!過(guò)年還悶在實(shí)驗(yàn)室改文章的孩子你們傷不起啊~~~ |
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