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the manuscript is written in a bad scientific and English language. There is an
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我想這樣回答：非常謝謝您提出的建議，您提出的問(wèn)題十分中肯，我們的專(zhuān)業(yè)英語(yǔ)水平的確需要進(jìn)一步提高。通過(guò)對(duì)全文的重新認(rèn)真仔細(xì)地閱讀，我們的確發(fā)現(xiàn)了很多語(yǔ)法和句子錯(cuò)誤，都在文中一一作了修改。我們還請(qǐng)了幾位英語(yǔ)老師幫忙校對(duì)語(yǔ)法和句子，希望修改后的文章在英語(yǔ)表達(dá)上更加清晰和準(zhǔn)確了。

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Answer: Thank you very much for your suggestion, your suggestion is very pertinent, our English language do need to be improved. Through re-reading of the full paper carefully, we have found a lot of phrases and grammatical errors, all of the errors have been revised. We also have invited several English teachers proofread the whole paper, I hope it is more clear and accurate now of this revised paper on the English expression.

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按樓主的意思自己翻譯如下：
Thanks very much for your comments, which are very helpful for us to improve the manuscript, and our language should be improved. After carefully check, we found many grammar and sentence errors, and have modified the manuscript accordingly. Furthermore, we have invited several English teachers help correct grammar and sentences, and we hope the revised paper will be more clear and accurate on expressions.
不過(guò)個(gè)人認(rèn)為，不需要寫(xiě)這么多，樓主可參考以下內(nèi)容回復(fù)：
Thank you for your work for our manuscript. Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important guiding significance to our researches. We have studied comments carefully and modified the manuscript accordingly. Detailed corrections are listed below point by point:

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按樓主的意思自己翻譯如下：
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