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[求助] 求論文摘要翻譯修改，

大家好，我畢業(yè)設(shè)計的一個論文摘要，結(jié)果老師說翻譯得不行，大家?guī)臀曳g翻譯吧，這是我的中文摘要：
內(nèi)蒙古某煤礦實行整合后，其生產(chǎn)過程中產(chǎn)生大量礦井廢水，會污染周圍環(huán)境，需進(jìn)行處理。其污水特征為懸浮物含量高，pH值低及油類含量較高。設(shè)計進(jìn)水水質(zhì)為pH 3~5、COD300mg/L、SS420mg/L、油類30mg/L、大腸桿菌230個/L。采用“中和+混凝+過濾”處理工藝，經(jīng)處理后，出水水質(zhì)可達(dá)到pH6~9、COD50mg/L、SS30mg/L、油類5mg/L、大腸桿菌3個/L，能滿足回用標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。污泥經(jīng)濃縮脫水后綜合利用。
整個處理工程總占地面積約為7.264畝，總投資成本為293.6024萬元，年運行成本為20.5479萬元，單位治水成本為0.34元/噸。
這是我自己的英文翻譯：
A lot of wastewater that is produced in a coal mine of Inner Mongolia after its integration is necessary to be treated in order to avoid the pollution of the environment. The characteristics of the coal mine waste water are high suspended solids content, low pH value and high oil content and so on. The quality of input water is pH3~5, COD300mg/L, SS420mg/L, oil30mg/L, Escherichia coli 230 /L. The process of “regulation + coagulation + filtration" will be adopted in the treatment of coal mine waste water. The quality of output water can be achieved as pH6~9, COD50mg/L, SS30mg/L, oil5mg/L, Escherichia coli 3 /L, which can meet the reuse standard. Sludge will be comprehensive utilization after thickening and dewatering.
About 4843 m2 will be covered in this project. The total project investment is 4728460 Yuan. Annual operation cost is 205479 Yuan. The unit cost of water treatment is 0.34 /t.

補充一下，老師建議The characteristics of the coal mine waste water are high suspended solids content, low pH value and high oil content and so on. The quality of input water is pH3~5, COD300mg/L, SS420mg/L, oil30mg/L, Escherichia coli 230 /L. 這句用There be句型。

[ Last edited by changfeng07 on 2012-6-1 at 18:20 ]

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changfeng07: 金幣+4 2012-06-05 19:03:13

首先，第一句翻譯句式太長了，應(yīng)該段成兩部分。翻譯如下：
After a coal mine in Inner Mongolia integrated, a large amount of wastewater will be produced which should be treated in order to avoid polluting the surrounding environment.
第二句按老師的there be巨型翻譯為：
There are high suspended solids, low pH value and high oil content in wastewater.
之后為The influent quality is pH3~5, COD300mg/L, SS420mg/L, oil30mg/L, Escherichia coli 230 /L.After the process of “regulation + coagulation + filtration" for treatment was adopted,the effluent quality reached to: pH6~9, COD50mg/L, SS30mg/L, oil5mg/L, Escherichia coli 3 /L,which can meet the reuse standard.Sludge will be comprehensive utilizated after concentrating and dewatering.
The total site area is about 4843 m2.The total investment is 2936024 yuan.

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