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Please tell me the gap between this passage and genuine english,thanks a lot!
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各位大蝦,幫看一下我的表述,有點地道還是很中國味?謝謝!我看cnn很久了,才開始寫東西。很痛苦。 i'm exhausted after finishing giving the 3d lessons.i should relax myself for a moment first,hehe.and next,i plan to complete my article which lasted almost one month at afternoon.now the rain stopped,i can hear birds' songs out of the windows ,hehe.the weather is not too bad.yesterday,one of my colleagues threw out a remark that nearly make us all die with laughing ,hehe.she complained that the only subject of her going to work every day is to visit the grave of the president of our university,hehe.all of us think this statement is a very classic sentence,haha. as to you,bought a wrong size mat,wow,the only thing you want me to do is to keep silence.what a silly mistake! you should measure the size of your bed accurately before you decided to pay for the mat.i remember i have told you many times:look before you leap.you can see your way clear after thoughtful consideration.baby,remember,keep it in your mind. i will go home a few minutes later and take a rest in order to get some strength back.maybe,i'll play ping-pang as usual. |
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禁蟲 (職業(yè)作家)
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uh,there still some chinglish ,for example:"the weather is not too bad",a standard chinglish... and you use so many "hehe" in your writing. anyhow,your english is good ,come on,you can write such a long text already. looking forward to your further articles ~ |

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