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After its entry, it was only a matter of time before the Allies defeated Germany and the Axis powers. Transitions for place: in the background, in the distance, beyond, behind, above, below, in front of, elsewhere, in the middle, to the left, to the right Example: My favorite painting is Botticelli’s Birth of Venus. In the middle of the painting stands Venus, the Roman goddess of love, standing on a seashell. She floats majestically above the beautiful water below her. To her left a figure representing wind blows fierce clouds of wind in her direction. To her right a figure behind her attempts to cover her with a blanket and protect her. It is a truly breath-taking piece of art. Transitions for examples: for example, for instance, as an example, like, specifically, consider as an illustration, that is, such as, similar, similarly Example: Oftentimes people who study from history fail to learn from the mistakes of the past. For example, during WWII Hitler decided to invade Russia just before wintertime. This decision was the same decision Napoleon made over a hundred years earlier, and Hitler’s army met a similar fate. Had he learned from his history, Hitler might have avoided making this costly mistake and the outcome for the war might have been different. For instance, if Hitler had decided to invade England by sea rather than Russia by land, he might well have won the war. Transitions for emphasis: chiefly, equally, indeed, even more important, in particular, most important, without a doubt, indubitably, unquestionably, definitely Example: Without a doubt, Chinese food is one of my favorite cuisines. Although I find Japanese and Thai food equally delicious at times, Chinese food is definitely my favorite Asian cuisine. In particular I enjoy the spicy Szechuan style of cooking commonly found in Chinese food. Transitions for restatement: in short, that is, in effect, in other words Example: When I asked my girlfriend to marry me she said, in effect, that she wouldn’t be ready for marriage until after she completed her PhD program. At first I was crushed, that is, I felt like she said no because she didn’t love me anymore. However, after she explained her reasons to me I felt better and agreed with her. In other words, I came away feeling better than I had anticipated. Transitions for comparison: similarly, likewise, also, the same as, different than, opposite, unlike, instead Example: When my older brother was deciding where to go to college he spoke to my father about where he should go. Not surprisingly he went to the same school my father did, MIT. When it was time for me to choose a college I did the exact opposite. I didn’t ask my father where I should go, and as a result, I didn’t also go to MIT like he and my brother did. Instead I went to UCLA. Transitions for concession: although, of course, admittedly, true, doubtless, granted that, no doubt, indubitably, without a doubt, definitely, certainly Example: Some people might be surprised to learn that the two most successful NBA teams of all-time are the Boston Celtics and the Los Angeles Lakers. Although neither of these teams is very good right now, they are the two teams with the most champions in NBA history. The Celtics definitely had the best streak of these two teams; winning eight championships in a row at one point. Admittedly there is always the chance that some future team could break this record, but this seems unlikely. Of course no one can predict the future with any certainty. Transitions for consequence: thus, so, then, it follows, as a result, therefore, hence, consequently, accordingly, because Example: I’m sorry, but I can’t let you turn in your homework late because it wouldn’t be fair to the other students. As a result your grade has dropped lower and you are now failing the class. Consequently you need to get 100% on the final so you can pass the class and then graduate from CAS. Therefore, I suggest you study very hard so I don’t have to fail you. Good luck! Transitions for conclusion: to sum up, in summary, finally, therefore, thus, in conclusion, to conclude Example: Finally, Beijing has a lot of nice places to shop that appeal to tourists. To sum up then, Beijing is a wonderful place to visit because it has beautiful parks and historical monuments, friendly people and lots of nice places to shop. Thus any travelers who are planning to come to China should definitely visit Beijing during their stay. Transitions for addition: furthermore, in addition, besides, next, first, second, moreover Example: UCLA is a wonderful university to attend as an undergraduate. First, it is respected academically and is well-known for its high standards of education. Furthermore, UCLA has a strong network of alumni who often recruit students to come work for them. Moreover students who do such work as undergraduates often receive jobs with these same companies once they graduate. In addition to these two benefits, UCLA also has exciting sports teams that are fun to watch. Besides, with so many good reasons to go to UCLA, why would you want to go anywhere else? 我的第三條經(jīng)驗(yàn)就是句酷網(wǎng)站，www.jukuu.com，一個(gè)專門找例句的網(wǎng)站，也許有些蟲友也知道。我們寫文章的時(shí)候，很自然會(huì)想到一些中文的表達(dá)方法，但是常�？嘤谡也坏劫N切的英文表達(dá)，查電子詞典，往往湊出來(lái)的句子也是面目全非。句酷網(wǎng)站提供了一個(gè)很好的查找例句的渠道（不是廣告奧，呵呵），你可以通過(guò)中英文關(guān)鍵字，找到很多例句。比如，我想說(shuō)“值得指出的是”，在句酷里面查了一下，找到了如下幾個(gè)句子： It is worth emphasizing that... it is worth pointing out that ... A point worth emphasizing is that... 感覺(jué)都還不錯(cuò)，都可以選用。更為關(guān)鍵的是，這些例句一般都會(huì)有出處，這樣就可以根據(jù)例句內(nèi)容和出處來(lái)選擇比較地道的表述了。 以上是蟲友Commonman在小木蟲上發(fā)表的，版權(quán)屬于Commonman。 另外，本人加一些關(guān)于“解釋”的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)，在我的論文中使用比較多。 This is caused by, This may be due to that, This is due to the fact that, It is due, This may(can) be explained as follows, This is because, Because of, Since, As, et al. 感謝小木蟲所提供的交流平臺(tái)，感謝蟲友們及時(shí)幫我解決論文中碰到的一些問(wèn)題。祝大家能取得心中所預(yù)想的成績(jī)，也祝福我的另兩篇論文順利接收！ |
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