 |
 |
 |
 |
 |
 |
||
 |
 |
 |
 |
 |
| 6 | 1/1 | 返回列表 |
| 查看: 1966 | 回復: 5 | |||
zongshengl木蟲 (小有名氣)
|
[交流]
Reliability Engineering & System Safety 返修意見 已有4人參與
|
|
各位蟲友，本人第一篇SCI論文今收到返修意見，第一審稿人不推薦，第二審稿人提的意見很多也很深刻（如下），感覺有點迷茫，請指點有沒有修改的必要？ Title: An ******* Reliability Engineering & System Safety Reviewers have now commented on your paper. You will see that they are advising that you revise your manuscript.For your guidance, reviewers' comments are appended below. If you decide to revise the work, please submit a list of changes or a rebuttal against each point which is being raised when you submit the revised manuscript. Editor/Reviewer comments: Reviewer #1: Please, find enclosed the attached file Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents a promising methodology. However, it requires major revisions involving, in particular, what concerns the pratical application of the approach proposed using a GA. MINOR COMMENTS: 1) Include a list of acronyms 2) Include a list of symbols 3) Check Eqn (15), C(x) = TC/W ?? 4) Format references according to RESS MAJOR COMMENTS 1) Provide more details on the fundamentals for Eqn. (16) or provide reference to previous work to justify its use. 2) Give details about the GA used: 2.1 Sort of GA (single-objective, steady state GA, ...) 2.2 Encoding of individuals in the population (real or integer encoding, parameters being encoded, ... 2.3 Step 3 is unclear. Provide more details on how the fitness function is obtained (formulation), in particular considering both Eqn (15) and (16), the later being the constraint. Thus, explain how the constraint are addressed in the GA performance (adopting a sort of penalization, etc ??) 3) Section 5 Empirical results provides the example of application. Need major improvement 3.1 Describe the physical item under study (is it a real equipment or just a numerical example) A real example is more approprite for the RESS audience 3.2 Provide more details on the results found for C(x), p(x) and what is represented in Tables and Figures. For example, now it is not easy to relize what a solution satisfy (or not) the constraint, p. 4) Conclusion section is of limited value. They are not based on a real and practical example of the methodology (a real system consisting of several components). The example of application is too simple for testing both the model and the GA. [ Last edited by zongshengl on 2012-9-19 at 11:47 ] |
回復此樓» 猜你喜歡
314求調(diào)劑
已經(jīng)有8人回復
-
08工科 320總分 求調(diào)劑
已經(jīng)有5人回復
-
085601專碩，總分342求調(diào)劑，地區(qū)不限
已經(jīng)有5人回復
-
085600材料與化工調(diào)劑 324分
已經(jīng)有4人回復
-
311求調(diào)劑
已經(jīng)有6人回復
-
化工學碩306求調(diào)劑
已經(jīng)有10人回復
-
286求調(diào)劑
已經(jīng)有8人回復
-
材料與化工一志愿南昌大學327求調(diào)劑推薦
已經(jīng)有9人回復
-
311求調(diào)劑
已經(jīng)有12人回復
-
271材料工程求調(diào)劑
已經(jīng)有3人回復
» 本主題相關(guān)價值貼推薦，對您同樣有幫助:
- Reliability Engineering & System Safety 咨詢
已經(jīng)有11人回復
獨步青云
新蟲 (職業(yè)作家)
術(shù)中小生
- 應助: 894 (博后)
- 金幣: 2993.1
- 散金: 3834
- 紅花: 16
- 帖子: 3587
- 在線: 241.8小時
- 蟲號: 339818
- 注冊: 2007-04-07
- 性別: GG
- 專業(yè): 中藥質(zhì)量評價
2樓2012-09-19 11:56:55
wpf870828
金蟲 (職業(yè)作家)
- 應助: 90 (初中生)
- 金幣: 3370.7
- 散金: 5410
- 紅花: 16
- 帖子: 4708
- 在線: 448.6小時
- 蟲號: 1871667
- 注冊: 2012-06-28
- 性別: GG
- 專業(yè): 應用數(shù)學方法
3樓2012-09-19 12:05:34
smallpumpkin
新蟲 (初入文壇)
- 應助: 0 (幼兒園)
- 金幣: 199.8
- 帖子: 22
- 在線: 14.8小時
- 蟲號: 1325161
- 注冊: 2011-06-17
- 專業(yè): 控制理論與方法
4樓2012-11-19 09:57:39
zongshengl
木蟲 (小有名氣)
- 應助: 1 (幼兒園)
- 金幣: 5218.9
- 散金: 144
- 紅花: 1
- 帖子: 151
- 在線: 103.2小時
- 蟲號: 1285718
- 注冊: 2011-05-04
- 性別: GG
- 專業(yè): 運籌與管理
5樓2012-11-21 08:37:41
Sunny87421
銀蟲 (小有名氣)
- 應助: 7 (幼兒園)
- 金幣: 4458.3
- 散金: 400
- 紅花: 5
- 帖子: 243
- 在線: 149小時
- 蟲號: 1218589
- 注冊: 2011-03-02
- 性別: MM
- 專業(yè): 防災工程
6樓2013-09-23 08:52:39
相關(guān)版塊跳轉(zhuǎn)
我要訂閱樓主 zongshengl 的主題更新
| 6 | 1/1 | 返回列表 |
| 最具人氣熱帖推薦 [查看全部] | 作者 | 回/看 | 最后發(fā)表 | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
|
[考研] 一志愿西南交大，求調(diào)劑 +4 | 材化逐夢人 2026-03-18 | 4/200 |
|
|---|---|---|---|---|
|
[考研] 材料專碩306英一數(shù)二 +10 | z1z2z3879 2026-03-16 | 13/650 |
|
|
|
[考研] 一志愿985，本科211，0817化學工程與技術(shù)319求調(diào)劑 +6 | Liwangman 2026-03-15 | 6/300 |
|
|
|
[考研] 299求調(diào)劑 +5 | △小透明* 2026-03-17 | 5/250 |
|
|
|
[考博] 26博士申請 +3 | 1042136743 2026-03-17 | 3/150 |
|
|
|
[考研] 考研求調(diào)劑 +3 | 橘頌. 2026-03-17 | 4/200 |
|
|
|
[考研] 301求調(diào)劑 +4 | A_JiXing 2026-03-16 | 4/200 |
|
|
|
[碩博家園] 湖北工業(yè)大學 生命科學與健康學院-課題組招收2026級食品/生物方向碩士 +3 | 1喜春8 2026-03-17 | 5/250 |
|
|
|
[考研] 材料專碩326求調(diào)劑 +6 | 墨煜姒莘 2026-03-15 | 7/350 |
|
|
|
[考研] 085600材料與化工求調(diào)劑 +5 | 緒幸與子 2026-03-17 | 5/250 |
|
|
|
[考研] 211本，11408一志愿中科院277分，曾在中科院自動化所實習 +6 | Losir 2026-03-12 | 7/350 |
|
|
|
[考研] [導師推薦]西南科技大學國防/材料導師推薦 +3 | 尖角小荷 2026-03-16 | 6/300 |
|
|
|
[考研] 304求調(diào)劑 +5 | 素年祭語 2026-03-15 | 5/250 |
|
|
|
[考研] 085601材料工程315分求調(diào)劑 +3 | yang_0104 2026-03-15 | 3/150 |
|
|
|
[考研] 復試調(diào)劑 +4 | z1z2z3879 2026-03-14 | 5/250 |
|
|
|
[考研] 330求調(diào)劑 +3 | ?醬給調(diào)劑跪了 2026-03-13 | 3/150 |
|
|
|
[考研] 四川大學085601材料工程專碩 初試294求調(diào)劑 +4 | 祝我們好在冬天 2026-03-11 | 4/200 |
|
|
|
[考研] 329求調(diào)劑 +3 | miaodesi 2026-03-12 | 4/200 |
|
|
|
[考研] 281求調(diào)劑 +9 | Koxui 2026-03-12 | 11/550 |
|
|
|
[考研] 283求調(diào)劑，材料、化工皆可 +8 | 蘇打水7777 2026-03-11 | 10/500 |
|