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求助! 文中第二段讓人難理解,意思是說我要把全文總長(zhǎng)度的25%刪減掉,然后補(bǔ)充在“Environmental Implications” and ”Conclusions” 部分?This absence of a true scientific motivation for this work becomes evident when the chapter on “environmental implications” (Page 17) talks for 13 lines about straw, before corncobs are brought back into the picture. Unfortunately, the importance of corncob-derived chars is only postulated based on comparisons with soil and humic acid, but not through comparison with char made from a different feedstock (Page 17, line 18). As it stands, the piece has a plethora of solid data but is lacking a message that would distinguish it from a laboratory report. I recommend to ask the author(s) for a revision that reduces the overall length of the text by at least 25% and replaces the “Environmental Implications” and ”Conclusions” chapters with robust inference in support of the authors claim that “Corncob biochars would be a promising sorbent for mitigating agricultural pesticide contamination”. |
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