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如題，想請人幫忙修改得稍微專業(yè)一點兒，然后有什么專業(yè)術(shù)語翻譯錯誤的麻煩指出來一下，在此先謝過各位了，很容易的，就是看看有木有什么明顯的錯誤或者好改的就好 The harms and effective solutions of traffic congestion 1980s there is a growingly increase about the ownership of Motor vehicle ,which facilitate the daily lives of people, but it is a huge waste of space .At the same time carbon emissions from motor vehicles contributed 26% of all as a result of a serious environmental pollution, thus leading to that existing roads are unable to cope with so many traffic volumes.That is why traffic congestion emerges. Traffic congestion, also known as traffic jams ，is crowded situation or at a slow speed of cars.It usually occurs in holiday or on rush hour time. As we all known，traffic congestion has a large number of harms，such as economic loss，driver’s negative emotions，the waste of fuel and environmental pollution.Let us talk about two of these： （1） Economic losses may be the visible and direct. U.S. road traffic data provider Inrix show that the United Kingdom wastes fuel that is worthy over 426 million pounds in traffic jams every year; each passenger has an a mean loss of 331 pounds each year due to traffic congestion, a total of 2.7 billion pounds. Traffic jams brought delaysand vehicles using the cost-value-added of 1.1 billion pounds a year,then the sum of all of the above , which totals in approximately 4.3 billion pounds.In fact ,so is the situation in China. （2） Traffic pollution is also the essential effect，it is likely to result in autistic children. According to data relatively，there is much effect in children compared to adults，children's place of residence from the highway closer ，the greater the likelihood of autism .Efforts will be made in research and development of fuel-cell-driven and power-driven vehicles aiming to mitigate the pollution induced by transportation. Traffic congestion has brought much damage to people’s daily lives. Transportation Ministry and other relevant agencies are trying to take measures to fight traffic congestion and inconvenience . （1） Traffice Congestion Pricing， as a means of traffic demand, is considered to alleviate the city traffic congestion and improve the environment effect。In 1976, Singapore took the lead of having traffic congestion fee in the city center area .Followed by Norway Oslo, London have correspondingly implemented congestion pricing measures.Indeed, after the implementation of congestion pricing, traffic volumes decreased and vehicle speed rised of pricing zone ,but it will bring the negative influence to the social economy and break the social justice。 (2)Public transport priority policy is another method of avoiding traffic jams.From the paradoxes of perspective, the Government has taken any policies and measures to control traffic congestion ，which is a dilemma. Central Government advocate priority to development public traffic, people also agreed that using public traffic and reducing car using is the only road of a city‘s sustainable development , It is strange that mayor or officials who takes a bus will became social news， capital of various major activities are is police car to make a only route or just limit passage, even national people's Congress is so 。who for who service of relationship seems to a kind of logic upside down, That is our readers should think about。. ps：金幣懸賞不知道咋回事，我直接對滿意的回復(fù)加錢吧[ Last edited by 忘憂之夏 on 2013-5-15 at 14:34 ] |
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growingly和increase 都是增長的意思。放在一起有點多余。1980s少加個介詞，可以讓人明白是從那是起，還是在那時。單三動詞后要加s. 前兩句邏輯有點問題。還有污染是二氧化碳，而不是碳原子。加油哦，能寫這么多東西真的很了不起但是語法有待提高。多度點閱讀會有幫助。我做了大改，希望不要介意...先給你改一段，如果能接受這種大改我可以繼續(xù)給你改。 The growth of motor vehicle ownerships has increased remarkably since 1980s. Although it facilitates our daily life，it also brings a huge problem of environmental contamination.Such as the carbon dioxide which is emitted from motor vehicles contributes approximately 26% of all environmental pollution。And with the continuous growth in the amount of motor vehicle，the existing roads become unable to copy with the traffic volumes，finally end up with the traffic congestion. |
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zhtear99: 金幣+5, 感謝辛勤應(yīng)助~~ 2013-05-16 20:18:40
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The growth of motor vehicle ownerships has increased remarkably since 1980s. Although it facilitates our daily life，it also brings a huge problem of environmental contamination.Such as the carbon dioxide which is emitted from motor vehicles contributes approximately 26% of all environmental pollution。And with the continuous growth in the amount of motor vehicle，the existing roads become unable to copy with the traffic volumes，finally end up with the traffic congestion. So what does the traffic congestion mean？It is a kind of situation with crowded cars occurs during the rush hour, especially in holiday. It is generally known that , traffic congestion will inevitably cause something bad such as economic loss, the negative emotions from drivers, the waste of fuel and environmental contamination et cetera. Let us talk about the two of these harm: The first one we are going to talk about is economic losses which is may be sometimes visible and direct. The U.S. road traffic data provider Inrix show that the cost of fuel consume in traffic is up to 4.56 billion pounds each year in United Kingdom. Due to the delays caused by traffic congestion, each passenger losses at least 331 pounds per year. Thus the sum of all mentioned above is approximately **billion pounds per year. So is the situation in China. The second essential harm effect mentioned here is traffic pollution which is likely to result in autistic children. According to the relevant data, live near highway will increase the risk of authism. And the likelihood of children who might be sick is greater than adult. . Efforts will be made in research and development of fuel-cell-driven and power-driven vehicles aiming to mitigate the pollution induced by transportation. 能力有限，有的 |
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The growth of motor vehicle ownerships has increased remarkably since 1980s. Although it facilitates our daily life，it also brings a huge problem of environmental contamination.Such as the carbon dioxide which is emitted from motor vehicles contributes approximately 26% of all environmental pollution。And with the continuous growth in the amount of motor vehicle，the existing roads become unable to copy with the traffic volumes，finally end up with the traffic congestion. So what does the traffic congestion mean？It is a kind of situation with crowded cars occurs during the rush hour, especially in holiday. It is generally known that , traffic congestion will inevitably cause something bad such as economic loss, the negative emotions from drivers, the waste of fuel and environmental contamination et cetera. Let us talk about the two of these harm: The first one we are going to talk about is economic losses which is may be sometimes visible and direct.The U.S. road traffic data provider Inrix show that the cost of fuel consume in traffic is up to 4.56 billion pounds each year in United Kingdom. Due to the delays caused by traffic congestion, each passenger losses at least 331 pounds per year. Thus the sum of all mentioned above is approximately **billion pounds per year. So is the situation in China. The second essential harm effect mentioned here is traffic pollution which is likely to result in autistic children. According to the relevant data, live near highway will increase the risk of authism. And the likelihood of children who might be sick is greater than adult. . Efforts will be made in research and development of fuel-cell-driven and power-driven vehicles aiming to mitigate the pollution induced by transportation. Traffic congestion has brought much damage to people’s daily lives. Transportation Ministry and other relevant agencies are trying to take measures to fight againt traffic congestion and inconvenience . Here we will discuss two of them. 1)Traffice Congestion Pricing， as a means of traffic demand, is considered to alleviate the city traffic congestion and improve the environment effect。In 1976, Singapore took the lead of having traffic congestion fee in the city center area .Followed by Norway Oslo, London have correspondingly implemented congestion pricing measures.Indeed, after the implementation of congestion pricing, traffic volumes decreased and vehicle speed rised of pricing zone ,but it will bring the negative influence to the social economy and break the social justice. 2)Public transport priority policy is another method of avoiding traffic jams. From the paradoxes of perspective, the government has taken any policies and measures to control traffic congestion ，which is a dilemma. Priority to developing public traffic advocated by Central Government, such as using public traffic and reducing private cars , is the only way for the city‘s sustainable development. Because the only route will be made by the police car and the passer-by will be limited while the officials go out. So it is still strange for civilians to see a mayor or officials who takes a bus and the event like this must became social news the following day. Maybe What we should pounder most is that why people begin to reverse the relationship about who should serve who . 嘎嘎~希望會對你有點幫助哈~ |
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第三段最后這個句子改成Due to the delays caused by traffic congestion，each passenger losses at least 331 pounds per year ，a total of 2.7 billion pounds。Thus the sum of all mentioned above is approximately 7.3 billion pounds per year.So the situation in China，losses is also huge because of it.(最后一句俺想表達的意思是，在中國也是如此，交通擁擠帶來的損失也很巨大） 其他前面稍微修改了了一下拼寫錯誤，差不多ok了，嘿嘿 |
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