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期刊論文中分析方法研究英文摘要常見錯(cuò)誤解析
容易犯的錯(cuò)誤
中文期刊一般將英文摘要附后,但國(guó)外的CA索引的一般是英文的摘要,所以英文的摘呀也很重要。 需要引起大家的注意。
1 中英文標(biāo)題不一致
2 中英文的關(guān)鍵詞不一致
3 不要將句子寫的太長(zhǎng)
4 善用倒裝句
5 注意時(shí)態(tài)一致。 一般用的過去式。
6 用好,respectiverly.
7 用意譯,不用直譯
8 中文內(nèi)容和英文內(nèi)容要一致。
三個(gè)實(shí)例
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氣相色譜- 質(zhì)譜法測(cè)定酒樣中多種有機(jī)錫化合物-
(原文)
摘 要: 對(duì)白酒中的有機(jī)錫化合物運(yùn)用NaBEt4 進(jìn)行衍生, 并采用液液萃取和氣相色譜- 質(zhì)譜法( GC-MS) 對(duì)5 種衍生物進(jìn)行分析, 建立了5 種有機(jī)錫同時(shí)分析的新方法。選用選擇離子掃描模式進(jìn)行定性和定量分析, 實(shí)驗(yàn)對(duì)影響反應(yīng)的重要參數(shù)進(jìn)行了優(yōu)化。在優(yōu)化條件下, 5 種有機(jī)錫化合物在0. 01~ 4. 0 ug mL- 1 的線性范圍內(nèi)得獲得了較好的線性, 檢測(cè)限, 相關(guān)系數(shù)為0. 992 3~ 0. 999 9, 檢測(cè)限為0. 4~ 5. 0 ug mL- 1 。在0. 05、0 . 50 和4. 0 ug mL- 1 3 個(gè)添加水平獲得了較好的回收率, 其相對(duì)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)偏差低于13. 4% 。該方法簡(jiǎn)便、快速、容易操作, 初步運(yùn)用于檢測(cè)酒樣中的有機(jī)錫化合物, 取得較滿意的結(jié)果。
關(guān)鍵詞: 有機(jī)錫; 衍生化; 液液萃取; 氣相色譜- 質(zhì)譜法; 酒樣
氣相色譜- 質(zhì)譜法測(cè)定酒樣中多種有機(jī)錫化合物
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Determination of variety of organotin compounds in food by gas chromatography-mass spectrometry
(variety 改成 various ; 把food改成 或spirits, liquor
英文標(biāo)題和中文不一致。 中文是酒樣,英文是食品。
原文:Abstract: The or gano tins in spirit w er e derivat ized w ith NaBEt 4 and five derivativ es w ere ex t racted by liquid-liquid ex t ract ion technique and analyzed by g as chromato graphy-mass spect romet ric ( GC-MS) analy sis.A new metho d to simultaneously study the five derivat iv es w as proposed. T he qualitat ive and quant itat iveanalysis of org anot ins w as carried o ut by GC-MS in SIM mode. The sig nif icant factors in the exper iment w ere opt imized. T he experiment par ameters concerned GC separat ion pr ogr am, sodium tet raethy lbor ate
concent rat ion, type and v olume of ex tr act io n solvent , ex t ract ion time, pH and salt ing out ef fect w ere opt-i mized. U nder the opt imized condit ions, the considerable lineart ies and recov eries of the org anot ins w ere obtained.
T he result s show ed the go od linearity w hen the analyt ical co ncent ratio n w as in the range o f 0. 01-4. 0 ug mL- 1 , the linear ity corr elat ion coeff icient s w ere betw een 0. 992 3 and 0. 999 9, w ith the LOD in the r ange o f 0. 4-5. 0 ug L- 1 . T he average recoveries for o rganot ins at three dif ferent addit ion levels w ere
betw een 68. 4% and 121. 0%, relat ive standar d deviat ions in the rang e of 5. 0%-13. 4%、4. 3%-10. 6% and 4. 3%-8. 9% respect iv ely . The metho d is proposed in this paper simple, rapid, and easy to implement for the determinat ion of or gano tins in spirit.
Key words: organot ins; derivat izat io n; GC-MS; w ines:
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關(guān)鍵詞:中文是酒,英文是wines, 一般是指葡萄酒。改成spirits or liquor(一般是指烈性酒)
重要參數(shù):significant factors,可以改成 key parameters
The significant factors in the experiment were optimized. The experiment parameters concerned GC separation progr am, sodium tet raethy lbor ateconcent rat ion, type and v olume of ex tr act io n solvent , ex t ract ion time, pH and salt ing out ef fect w ere opt-imized.
和中文摘要不一致。 可以縮寫為:The main experimental parameters, such as, GC separation progr am, sodium tetraethylborate concentration, types and volumes of extraction solvent , ext ract ion time, pH and salinity were optimized.
The metho d is proposed in this paper simple, rapid, and easy to implement for the
determinat ion of or gano tins in spirit.改成
The method proposed in this paper is simple, rapid, and easy to implement.
中文寫的是:。在0. 05、0 . 50 和4. 0 ug mL-1 個(gè)添加水平獲得了較好的回收率, 其相對(duì)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)偏差低于13. 4%
可以改成
The average recoveries for organotins at three different spiked concentrations, 0. 05、0 . 50 和4. 0 ug mL-1,were between 68.4%-121.0%, the relative standard deviations were all below 13.4%.
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高效液相色譜法測(cè)定化妝品中的7 種色素
摘要: 建立了用高效液相色譜-二極管陣列檢測(cè)法( HPLC-DAD) 同時(shí)檢測(cè)化
妝品中7 種著色劑( 胭脂紅Ponceau) 、萘酚黃( Naphthol Yellow S Hydrate) 、日落
黃( Food Yellow 3) 、酸性紅33( Acid Red 33) 、誘惑紅( Allura Red AC) 、酸性紅13
( Acid Red 13) 、酸性橙( Orange II) ) 的檢測(cè)方法。不同種類的化妝品采用不同
的樣品前處理方法提取后,用C18 色譜柱分離,以甲醇-乙酸胺為流動(dòng)相進(jìn)行梯
度洗脫,檢測(cè)波長(zhǎng)為240nm,14 min 內(nèi)可對(duì)7 種目標(biāo)物同時(shí)進(jìn)行檢測(cè),且各化合
物都達(dá)到基線分離。經(jīng)測(cè)定,該方法的平均回收率為90. 5% ~ 100. 6%,相對(duì)標(biāo)
準(zhǔn)偏差為3. 2% ~ 6. 7%,方法檢出限萘酚黃為5 mg /L,其余為3 mg /L。方法
簡(jiǎn)單、快速,能有效地提取、分離和測(cè)定化妝品中7 種著色劑。方法可用于實(shí)際
化妝品的檢測(cè)。
關(guān)鍵詞: 高效液相色譜; 色素; 化妝品
原文
Abstract: Ananalytical method based on high performance liquid chromatography with diode array detector ( HPLC-DAD) has been established for the simultaneous determination of 7colorants ( Ponceau,Naphthol Yellow S Hydrate,F(xiàn)ood Yellow 3,Acid Red 33,Allura Red AC,Acid Red 13,Orange II) in cosmetics. The different kinds of samples were treated with different preparation methods. The obtained liquid samples were analyzed by HPLC using a Diamonsil C18 column ( 250 mm × 4. 6 mm × 5μm) . Methanol / ammonium acetate ( CH3COONH4) was used as the mobilephase for gradientelution. The wave length of detection is 240nm. The 7 colorants were separated with in 14 min. The average recoveries were from 90. 5% to 100. 6% with the relative standard deviations( RSDs) between 3. 2% and 6. 7%. The limits of detection ( LOD) were 3 mg /L except that Naphthol Yellow S Hydrate was 5 mg /L. The method is simple,rapid,accurate and suitable for the determination of 7 colorants.
Keywords: High performance liquid chromatography ( HPLC) ; Colorants; Cosmetics
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Determination of 7 colorants in cosmetics by high performance liquid chromatography
(一般在標(biāo)題中不寫阿拉伯?dāng)?shù)字,可以寫seven; 改成
Simutaneous determination of seven colorants in cosmetics with high performance liquid chromatography
單詞拼寫不對(duì): ananalytical
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Abstract: An analytical method using high performance liquid chromatography with diode array detector( HPLC-DAD) has been developed for simultaneous determination of 7 colorants in cosmetics, ie., Ponceau,Naphthol Yellow S Hydrate,F(xiàn)ood Yellow 3,Acid Red 33,Allura Red AC,Acid Red 13,Orange II.Different kinds of samples were pretreated, respectively.The obtained liquid samples were analyzed by HPLC using a Diamonsil C18 column ( 250 mm × 4. 6 mm × 5μm) . Methanol / ammonium acetate ( CH3COONH4) was used as the mobile phase for gradient elution. The wave length of detection is 240nm. The seven colorants were separated within 14 min. The average recoveries varied from 90. 5% to 100. 6% with the relative standard deviations( RSDs) between 3. 2% and 6. 7%. The limits of detection ( LOD) were 3 mg /L except that Naphthol Yellow S Hydrate was 5 mg /L. The method is simple,rapid,accurate and suitable for the determination of 7 colorants in cosmetics.
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原文
超高效液相色譜三重四極桿質(zhì)譜法同時(shí)快速測(cè)定血漿和尿液中11 種殺鼠劑
摘要
建立了血漿和尿液中11 種殺鼠劑同時(shí)測(cè)定的超高效液相色譜串聯(lián)質(zhì)譜方法。血漿樣品經(jīng)乙腈沉淀、尿液樣品經(jīng)乙酸乙酯萃取,氮吹濃縮后用初始流動(dòng)相復(fù)溶,在UPLC BEH C18柱上以甲醇-4 mmol /L 乙酸銨為流動(dòng)相進(jìn)行梯度洗脫分離,負(fù)離子電噴霧多反應(yīng)監(jiān)測(cè)模式檢測(cè),基質(zhì)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)外標(biāo)法定量分析。血漿和尿液中11 種殺鼠劑的加標(biāo)回收率分別在68% ~ 118%和62% ~ 104%之間; 日內(nèi)相對(duì)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)偏差分別為5. 6% ~ 21%和4. 1% ~ 18%; 日間相對(duì)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)偏差分別為8. 5% ~ 26% 和7. 1% ~ 25% ( n = 6) 。除尿液中安妥的定量限為5 μg /L 外,其余待測(cè)物的定量限均為1 μg /L。本方法靈敏度高,操作簡(jiǎn)單,適于中毒病人的快速診斷檢測(cè)。
原文
Abstract
A method was developed for the determination of eleven rodenticides,antu,warfarin,brodifacoum,bromadiolone,coumachlor,coumatetralyl,difenacoum,flocoumafen,chlorophacinone and diphacinone,
in human plasma and urine using ultraperformance liquid chromatography-tandem mass spectrometry.Those rodenticides were extracted from plasma with acetonitrile and from urine with ethyl acetate. The extracts were dried by nitrogen stream and redissolved with the initial mobile phase. The analysis of the rodenticides was achieved on an UPLC BEH C18 column gradient eluted w ith the mobile phase of methanol and 4 mmol /L ammonium acetate solution in a cycle time of 7. 0 min,and detected by an electrospray ionization tandem mass
spectrometry in the multiple-reaction-monitoring negative mode. The average recoveries were 68% - 118% and 62% - 104% for all rodenticides in plasma and urine,respectively,with RSDs of 5. 6% - 21% and 4. 1% - 18%( n = 6) . The limits of quantitation were 1 μg /L ( S /N = 10) except that of antu in urine was
5 μg /L. The method was simple,selective and sensitive to detect the rodenticides in plasma and urine for toxicological purposes.
Keywords Ultra performance liquid chromatography tandem mass spectrometry; Rodenticides; Plasma; Urine
Ultra performance liquid chromatography tandem mass spectrometry; Rodenticides; 太長(zhǎng),可以改成 UPLC-MS/MS
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The average recoveries were in the range of 68%-118% and 62-104% for all.. with RSDs in the range of 5.6%-21% and 4.1%-18% (n=6), respectively.
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