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本人菜鳥一個，第一次寫論文，外審專家說語言不過關(guān)，極難讀懂，本人在修改的時候一些疑惑請大神們給點建議，在此先謝過了。 1、work roll (WR) axial force was 0.5%-1% of rolling force under of good assembly condition, and about 5% of rolling force under roll crossing condition.文中and后面這句對嗎？ 2、1700mm cold rolling mill in Wuhan Steel Co. was 5% of rolling force in the normal state. 其中the 對嗎，不加可以嗎？不加the需要加冠詞嗎還是state復數(shù)形式？ 3、resulted in the dynamic crossing of roll system and dynamic growth of axial force 還是resulted in the roll system dynamic crossing and axial force dynamic growth 那個對為什么？科技英語中用名詞做定語還是of短語好？ 4、It is of great significance for both controlling plate thickness and shape and prolonging the service life of rolling mills to explore the cause of screwdown load deviation. 還是 It is of great significance both for controlling plate thickness and shape and prolonging the service life of rolling mills to explore the cause of screwdown load deviation.還是It is of great significance both for controlling thickness and shape of plates and prolonging the service life of rolling mills to explore the cause of screwdown load deviation.那句更地道更準確？ 5、the value of work roll (WR) axial force was 0.5%-1% of rolling force under good assembly condition, and it was about 5% of rolling force under roll crossing condition. 還是 the value of work roll (WR) axial force was 0.5%-1% of rolling force under good assembly condition, and about 5% of rolling force under roll crossing condition.更好 ，更地道 6、The ref [4] investigated work roll axial movement of Capital Steel Corporation four-high plate mill.其中the ref 的the不加行嗎？科技論文中定冠詞the和不定冠詞a或者an怎么使用，特別亂，不會用。 7、Previous person have done a lot of research about thrust force calculating and testing work.其中about thrust force calculating and testing work對嗎還是about calculating and testing of thrust force . 8、but the author did not give the mechanism and calculation model for the influence of axial force on screwdown load deviation我想表達：“但作者并未給出軸向力對軋制支反力偏差的影響機理和計算模型”，這句話表達對嗎？ 9、It may lead the screwdown load on the DS stands to increase while on the WS stands to decrease. If the gaps in the WS housing are large, while in the DS housing are small, 句子中while使用 的對嗎可以連接兩個賓語補足語嗎？還用這種表達在科技論文中合適嗎？ |
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馬池躍
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1、work roll (WR) axial force 【accounted for】 0.5%-1% of rolling force under good assembly condition, and 【for】 5% of rolling force under roll crossing condition. 2、1700mm cold rolling mill in Wuhan Steel Co. was 5% of rolling force in the normal state. 其中the 對嗎，不加可以嗎？不加the需要加冠詞嗎還是state復數(shù)形式？可以不加the， in normal state 就是個詞組。另外 was 可以換成其它的詞語，例如【accounted for; occupied; 這里選擇occupied吧 】 3、resulted in the dynamic crossing of roll system and dynamic growth of axial force 還是resulted in the roll system dynamic crossing and axial force dynamic growth 那個對為什么？科技英語中用名詞做定語還是of短語好？加of好，科技英語中習慣用 “名詞 +of ” 4、It is of great significance for both controlling plate thickness and shape and prolonging the service life of rolling mills to explore the cause of screwdown load deviation. 還是 It is of great significance both for controlling plate thickness and shape and prolonging the service life of rolling mills to explore the cause of screwdown load deviation. 還是It is of great significance both for controlling thickness and shape of plates and prolonging the service life of rolling mills to explore the cause of screwdown load deviation.哪句更地道更準確？ 第三個相對要好些，但是還是有點問題，可以改成“Both controlling thickness and shape of plates and prolonging the service life of rolling mills are of great importance in exploring the cause of screwdown load deviation” 5、the value of work roll (WR) axial force was 0.5%-1% of rolling force under good assembly condition, and it was about 5% of rolling force under roll crossing condition. 還是 the value of work roll (WR) axial force was 0.5%-1% of rolling force under good assembly condition, and about 5% of rolling force under roll crossing condition.更好 ，更地道 請見參見問題1， the value of work roll (WR) axial force accounted for 0.5%-1% of rolling force under good assembly condition, and for about 5% of rolling force under roll crossing condition. 6、The ref [4] investigated work roll axial movement of Capital Steel Corporation four-high plate mill.其中the ref 的the不加行嗎？科技論文中定冠 詞the和不定冠詞a或者an怎么使用，特別亂，不會用。 我覺得不加比較好， 但是為了避免這種情況，可以用"In ref [4] it investigated"7、Previous person have done a lot of research about thrust force calculating and testing work.其中about thrust force calculating and testing work對嗎還是about calculating and testing of thrust force . “about calculating and testing of thrust force”這個更好；另一方面，previous person聽著怪怪，一般不這么表達，可以用“Previous researchers” 后面“research about”改成“studies on”以免重復。 8、but the author did not give the mechanism and calculation model for the influence of axial force on screwdown load deviation我想表達：“但作者并未給出 軸向力對 軋制支反力偏差的 影響機理 和 計算模型”，這句話表達對嗎？ 不對，應該改成 "however, the author did not present the influence mechanism or the calculation model of axial force upon screwdown load deviation." 9、It may lead the screwdown load on the DS stands to increase while on the WS stands to decrease. If the gaps in the WS housing are large, while in the DS housing are small, 句子中while使用 的對嗎可以連接兩個賓語補足語嗎？還用這種表達在科技論文中合適嗎？ while 可以用，但是句子結(jié)構(gòu)不對，可以改成 “It may lead the increase of screwdown load on the DS stands, while the decrease of on the WS stands. And if the gaps in the WS housing are large, the gaps in the DS housing are small” |
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