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大神給看看這幾句話翻譯對不對，特別是冶金的牛人，只為金幣的別進(jìn)，敷衍了事的別進(jìn)
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1、在軋輥交叉情況下，這樣翻譯對嗎： under roll crossing conditions 2、between 5m rolling mill screwdown device and backup roll (BUR) bearing chock 對還是between screwdown device of 5m rolling mill and backup roll (BUR) bearing chock 這后一個(gè)表述對 3、 According to space equilibrium of both force and moment on BUR對還是 According to force and moment space equilibrium of BUR對還是 According to BUR space force and moment equilibrium 最后一個(gè)對？ 4、It is also of guiding significance for rolling mill structure designing.對還是It is also of guiding significance for structure designing of rolling mill.還是It is also of guiding significance for designing of rolling mill structure. 5、Rolling force of heavy plate is huge其中軋制力巨大，用huge表示力很大對嗎？ 6、The problems of roll axial force occurred in many rolling plants have been reported.對還是Roll axial force problems occurred in many rolling plants have been reported.這種of+名詞作定語什么時(shí)候用合適？ 7、the model of axial shifting resistance of HC intermediate roll was established based on preliminary displacement principle.對還是the axial shifting resistance model of HC intermediate roll was established based on preliminary displacement principle.更對，請解釋一下為什么更好 8、A kind of microscale static determinate roll structure was put forward.對嗎，怎么改 9、It presented axial force could lead to dynamic deviation of screwdown load. 還是It presented axial force could lead to dynamic screwdown load deviation . 還是It presented axial force could lead to screwdown load dynamic deviation . 10 based on the force and moment equilibrium of upper roll system對還是based on the equilibrium of force and moment on upper roll system后一句對 11、想表達(dá)上下支承輥軸向力方向不同可能導(dǎo)致上機(jī)架牌坊軋制載荷增大，而同一側(cè)牌坊的下側(cè)軋制載荷減小，下面的翻譯對嗎？怎么寫好，Different directions of friction on upper and lower BURs may lead the increase of load on the upper stand, while decrease of load on the lower of the same stand. |
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1、在軋輥交叉情況下，這樣翻譯對嗎： under roll crossing conditions建議不要“s” under roll crossing condition 2、between 5m rolling mill screwdown device and backup roll (BUR) bearing chock 對還是between screwdown device of 5m rolling mill and backup roll (BUR) bearing chock 這后一個(gè)表述對 前者更好 3、 According to space equilibrium of both force and moment on BUR對還是 According to force and moment space equilibrium of BUR對還是 According to BUR space force and moment equilibrium 最后一個(gè)對？ moment equilibrium 力矩平衡，為整理 space force 空間力量，為整體。 如果您要表達(dá)的意思是“根據(jù)BUR的力矩平衡和空間力量”，那么就是： According to the moment equilibrium and space force of the BUR 4、It is also of guiding significance for rolling mill structure designing.對還是It is also of guiding significance for structure designing of rolling mill.還是It is also of guiding significance for designing of rolling mill structure. 其實(shí)三個(gè)都可以，個(gè)人偏向第一個(gè)，其次第三個(gè)，再次第二個(gè) 5、Rolling force of heavy plate is huge其中軋制力巨大，用huge表示力很大對嗎？ 可以 6、The problems of roll axial force occurred in many rolling plants have been reported.對還是Roll axial force problems occurred in many rolling plants have been reported.這種of+名詞作定語什么時(shí)候用合適？ 第二個(gè)更好，用了of，后面就要用名次了，或者是動名詞，第一句of 后面還是occurred，這個(gè)有語法錯誤。但是更重要的是，第一句中，of右面單獨(dú)的說roll axial force 這并不是一個(gè)“問題”，個(gè)人覺得用“Roll axial force problems”這個(gè)排列順序更好。 7、the model of axial shifting resistance of HC intermediate roll was established based on preliminary displacement principle.對還是the axial shifting resistance model of HC intermediate roll was established based on preliminary displacement principle.更對，請解釋一下為什么更好 第二個(gè)好，“resistance model”是個(gè)整體，最好不要分開。如果硬要把model of，的形式，最好是the model of axial shifting resistance force,擠一個(gè)force，讓resistance force 湊成一個(gè)整體，更加完整。 8、A kind of microscale static determinate roll structure was put forward.對嗎，怎么改 一般不要"a kind of ",因?yàn)椤耙环N什么什么，是中文思維” 同時(shí)static determinate 改成 statically determinated 更好 A microscale statically determinated roll structure was put forward，或者是 we put forward a microscale statically determinated roll structure(這個(gè)其實(shí)更好，避免頭重腳輕) 9、It presented axial force could lead to dynamic deviation of screwdown load. 還是It presented axial force could lead to dynamic screwdown load deviation . 還是It presented axial force could lead to screwdown load dynamic deviation . 第一個(gè)更好，但是前面要做些修改，It presented that the axial force could lead to the dynamic deviation of screwdown load. 10 based on the force and moment equilibrium of upper roll system對還是based on the equilibrium of force and moment on upper roll system后一句對第一個(gè)對。 11、想表達(dá) 上下支承輥 軸向力 方向不同 可能導(dǎo)致 上機(jī)架 牌坊 軋制載荷增大，而同一側(cè) 牌坊的 下側(cè) 軋制載荷減小，下面的翻譯對嗎？怎么寫好，Different directions of friction on upper and lower BURs may lead the increase of load on the upper stand, while decrease of load on the lower of the same stand. 改成“Due to the different axial forces of upper and lower BURs, the rolling load on the upper stand may increase, while the rolling load on the lower stand of the same side may decrease.” |
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