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1.Silica network densified and small holes sealed because of structural adjustment during heating process, and thus the oxidation was stopped at lower temperature. 2.The oxidation resistance temperature was improved at least 40℃ than the previous work . Meanwhile, the oxidation ended at 673 and 693℃ for samples 1 and 2 which is lower than pristine UFDs. |
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SunShine-91: 金幣+3, 翻譯EPI+1, ★★★很有幫助, 很給力，謝謝 2015-06-21 10:14:19
SunShine-91: 金幣+3, 翻譯EPI+1, ★★★很有幫助, 很給力，謝謝 2015-06-21 10:14:19
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1.Silica network densified and small holes sealed because of structural adjustment during heating process, thus the oxidation stopped at lower temperature. 其中用了thus就不要再用and了，另外改用stopped而非was stopped。 2.The oxidation resistance temperature was improved by at least 40℃ over the previous work . Meanwhile, the oxidation ended at 673 and 693℃ for samples 1 and 2 which were lower than pristine UFDs. was improved at least 40℃ than 需要改為 was improved by at least 40℃ over; 另外，which is lower than pristine UFDs需要改為which were lower than pristine UFDs （前面是兩個溫度，時態(tài)上要統(tǒng)一） |
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第一句沒語病 建議改第二句為 The oxidation resistance temperature was at least 40℃ LOWER than PREVIOUSLY REPORTED [資料來源] Oxidation ended at 673℃ and 693℃ for samples 1 and 2, RESPECTIVELY, BOTH OF which ARE lower than pristine UFD's. UFD 是縮寫, UFD's 是復(fù)數(shù) |
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