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麻煩誰(shuí)幫忙看一下我的自我介紹怎么樣(明天要用) 已有4人參與
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時(shí)間緊,沒重新謄寫,請(qǐng)批評(píng)指正。。。不知道是不是好多Chinglish 發(fā)自小木蟲IOS客戶端 |

鐵桿木蟲 (正式寫手)
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對(duì)什么感興趣是be interested in,語(yǔ)法注意一下,錯(cuò)誤比較明顯。 發(fā)自小木蟲Android客戶端 |
鐵桿木蟲 (正式寫手)
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你應(yīng)該是面試的時(shí)候用的,按照英文的表達(dá)方式既然你要介紹自己了就不用說(shuō)出那句接下來(lái)我將介紹我自己這樣比較好。就這一點(diǎn)給一點(diǎn)小小的建議。 發(fā)自小木蟲Android客戶端 |
鐵桿木蟲 (正式寫手)
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非常建議你能再次把表述的內(nèi)容梳理一下,盡量有條理一些,表達(dá)方式再修改一下,里面的表達(dá)確實(shí)有很多是中文式的英語(yǔ)。。。祝你好運(yùn)! 發(fā)自小木蟲Android客戶端 |
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幫你改寫了, 請(qǐng)笑納 Thank you all for being here I appreciate this opportunity to introduce myself in person I'm 23 I come from a typical nuclear family in rural China My college major is accounting I'm trying to be the first in my whole extended family to earn a PhD, and to do so in a subject that's always been near and dear to my heart China's planned economy has been on a meteoric rise all my adult life Every time China's 7% annual GDP growth is headline news, I'm there reading between the lines, checking economic data, walking the streets to find out the truth for myself I enjoy walking, and even more so running and playing badminton Running builds character Badminton make me a better team player on and off the court I'm living proof that success depends more on perseverance than one's looks or family background My country folk sensibility for the Chinese and world economies has already made me a better accountant Please consider admitting me so I would have an opportunity to share my skill and world view I thank you all sincerely |
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