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NK_xiaoya

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[求助] 請(qǐng)求幫忙修改一下我的套磁信，謝謝了

相中一位老師，以下是我寫(xiě)給一個(gè)老師的套磁信，第一次寫(xiě)，不知道該寫(xiě)成什么樣子，側(cè)重點(diǎn)是什么，還希望有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的人指導(dǎo)一下，我先謝謝了
Dear Dr. XX:

My name is XXX, a master student from China.

I have learned about your research from website, and I am highly interested in your research on medical imaging and image analysis on life science applications. I want to pursue my Ph.D. in your program.

With a GPA of 3.29/4, majoring in automation, I received my bachelor degree at XXUniversity (topX in China) in 2009. Two programs I had taken part in were in relation to medicine. One is the Innovative Project I joined with other 4 students as sophomores, and another is my thesis research (you can find more details in my CV). The experience makes me learn the value of some research and its applicability in some necessary fields attracts me a lot, and I am quite sincere to look for a new starting point in my research and career based on this.

Ranking top 1/38 as a master in xx, my research interest focuses on XXprocessing (more details in my CV), and I'll finish my graduate in Jan. 2012. I know that my background in XX may not be quite suitable for your group. But I am quite happy to learn some new knowledge and skills, and I believe I can master new programs/projects quite well.

Could you reconsider me as a PHD position in your lab? And if you have openings for that, I would be honored.

I attached my C.V and scanned transcript in this letter.

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1樓 2011-07-05 22:55:35

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Originally posted by CHYGO at 2011-07-06 00:40:38:
你機(jī)械工程專(zhuān)業(yè)的？我也正在申請(qǐng)。。。

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任何選擇都是一種人生，并且是最好的選擇，需要做的就是選擇后信心滿滿地走下去~

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你機(jī)械工程專(zhuān)業(yè)的？我也正在申請(qǐng)。。。

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NK_xiaoya(金幣+5): 2011-07-06 10:50:14
heding(金幣+3): thx for commu. 歡迎常來(lái)DIY大家庭撒！～ 2011-07-06 11:22:43

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Originally posted by NK_xiaoya at 2011-07-05 22:55:35:
相中一位老師，以下是我寫(xiě)給一個(gè)老師的套磁信，第一次寫(xiě)，不知道該寫(xiě)成什么樣子，側(cè)重點(diǎn)是什么，還希望有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的人指導(dǎo)一下，我先謝謝了
Dear Dr. XX:

My name is XXX, a master student from China.

I hav ...

Dear Dr. XX:

My name is XXX, a master student from China.

I have studied your research area of medical imaging and image analysis on life science applicationsfrom website, which attracted my big interest . I would like to pursue my Ph.D. degree in your group.

I received my bachelor degree at XXUniversity (topX in China) in 2009, with a GPA of 3.29/4 是不是前幾名是的話寫(xiě)個(gè)top幾, majoring in automation. Two programs I had taken part in were in relation to medicine. One is an innovative Project worked with other 4 students as sophomores, and the other is my thesis research (you can find more details in my CV). (The experience makes me learn the value of some research and its applicability in some necessary fields attracts me a lot) 這段寫(xiě)點(diǎn)你學(xué)會(huì)了的東西,寫(xiě)點(diǎn)實(shí)在的,比如會(huì)用了什么分析方法. and I am quite sincere to look forward a new starting point in my research and career based on this.

Ranking top 1/38 as a master in xx 這段看的很別扭, my research interest focuses on XXprocessing 如果有研究成果了突出一下,比如又沒(méi)有什么paper了,這個(gè)地方詳細(xì)寫(xiě)下. (more details in my CV), and I'll finish my graduate in Jan. 2012. I know that my background in XX may not be quite suitable for your group 最好不要寫(xiě)這樣的話,建議換成直接寫(xiě)能為你在未來(lái)的科研中提供怎樣的幫助,比如你有很好的研究基礎(chǔ),基本的儀器,手段你都會(huì). I desire to accept much knowledge and skills, and I believe I could hold new programs/projects quite well.

Could you reconsider me as a PHD candidate in your lab? Appreciate for your attention

My C.V and scanned transcript were attached in this letter.

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3樓2011-07-06 01:11:02

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heding(金幣+2): thx for commu. 歡迎常來(lái)DIY大家庭撒！～ 2011-07-06 11:22:55

具體就不改了，多寫(xiě)寫(xiě)自己為什么感興趣，在科研中遇到過(guò)什么問(wèn)題，怎么解決的，以后的打算是什么！不要寫(xiě)那個(gè)排名了，沒(méi)意思，有點(diǎn)顯得你只會(huì)考試似的！

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