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NK_xiaoya銅蟲 (正式寫手)
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請求幫忙修改一下我的套磁信,謝謝了
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相中一位老師,以下是我寫給一個老師的套磁信,第一次寫,不知道該寫成什么樣子,側(cè)重點是什么,還希望有經(jīng)驗的人指導一下,我先謝謝了 Dear Dr. XX: My name is XXX, a master student from China. I have learned about your research from website, and I am highly interested in your research on medical imaging and image analysis on life science applications. I want to pursue my Ph.D. in your program. With a GPA of 3.29/4, majoring in automation, I received my bachelor degree at XXUniversity (topX in China) in 2009. Two programs I had taken part in were in relation to medicine. One is the Innovative Project I joined with other 4 students as sophomores, and another is my thesis research (you can find more details in my CV). The experience makes me learn the value of some research and its applicability in some necessary fields attracts me a lot, and I am quite sincere to look for a new starting point in my research and career based on this. Ranking top 1/38 as a master in xx, my research interest focuses on XXprocessing (more details in my CV), and I'll finish my graduate in Jan. 2012. I know that my background in XX may not be quite suitable for your group. But I am quite happy to learn some new knowledge and skills, and I believe I can master new programs/projects quite well. Could you reconsider me as a PHD position in your lab? And if you have openings for that, I would be honored. I attached my C.V and scanned transcript in this letter. |
AIMed phd | 英語資料 |

金蟲 (正式寫手)
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實話告訴你吧,這差不多是小木蟲經(jīng)典模板...我就是這么寫的,收效甚微....我發(fā)了10多封郵件,只有3個人回復(fù)我。 原因是:首先,他們不關(guān)心你的成績,你的CV他們也不會看;其次你對他的興趣沒有體現(xiàn)出來,他們覺得你只是在廣泛發(fā)郵件而已.... 然后我換了個形式,從他們的目前研究課題出發(fā)套詞,不用這種方式發(fā),其中某個當時沒回復(fù)的老師第二天一早就回復(fù)我了。雖然這個老師后來又不鳥我了,不過這種方法來說肯定會好許多 |
金蟲 (正式寫手)
鐵桿木蟲 (正式寫手)
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Dear Dr. XX: My name is XXX, a master student from China. I have studied your research area of medical imaging and image analysis on life science applicationsfrom website, which attracted my big interest . I would like to pursue my Ph.D. degree in your group. I received my bachelor degree at XXUniversity (topX in China) in 2009, with a GPA of 3.29/4 是不是前幾名是的話寫個top幾, majoring in automation. Two programs I had taken part in were in relation to medicine. One is an innovative Project worked with other 4 students as sophomores, and the other is my thesis research (you can find more details in my CV). (The experience makes me learn the value of some research and its applicability in some necessary fields attracts me a lot) 這段寫點你學會了的東西,寫點實在的,比如會用了什么分析方法. and I am quite sincere to look forward a new starting point in my research and career based on this. Ranking top 1/38 as a master in xx 這段看的很別扭, my research interest focuses on XXprocessing 如果有研究成果了突出一下,比如又沒有什么paper了,這個地方詳細寫下. (more details in my CV), and I'll finish my graduate in Jan. 2012. I know that my background in XX may not be quite suitable for your group 最好不要寫這樣的話,建議換成直接寫能為你在未來的科研中提供怎樣的幫助,比如你有很好的研究基礎(chǔ),基本的儀器,手段你都會. I desire to accept much knowledge and skills, and I believe I could hold new programs/projects quite well. Could you reconsider me as a PHD candidate in your lab? Appreciate for your attention My C.V and scanned transcript were attached in this letter. |
至尊木蟲 (知名作家)
山野漁夫

至尊木蟲 (知名作家)
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其實外國老板一般來說,很少會在乎你是第一名,還是第二名.寫東西不要以中國人的思路去寫這個,除非你要去的這個老板母語就是中文. 二樓修改的地方,樓主需要注意,尤其是 PHD Candidate...而不是 PHD. 我的建議是,多寫你對外國老板的某個研究領(lǐng)域感興趣,而且你在相關(guān)領(lǐng)域都發(fā)布過哪些文章,做過哪些事情.這樣才能讓老板對你有興趣. 換位思考,如果你是老板,你需要的是一個成績不錯的人?還是一個能具備在我課題組里給我做事的人? 你如果是老板,一個人想在你的課題組里讀博士,你覺得,你最需要他在你課題組了做什么?這樣你就會寫第二和第三段了. 最后,預(yù)祝你成功! |

銅蟲 (正式寫手)

銅蟲 (正式寫手)

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