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lrxfly鐵桿木蟲(chóng) (正式寫(xiě)手)
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materials and design修改求助
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小弟8月初投出的,23號(hào)返回的審稿意見(jiàn),這個(gè)期刊沒(méi)提大修小修,只有編輯說(shuō)現(xiàn)階段發(fā)表不能還有兩個(gè)審稿意見(jiàn),一個(gè)是英文方面的,The whole english of the paper should be improved,還有一些小的細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題. 另外一個(gè)審稿人的意見(jiàn)就很不好處理了,具體如下 The authors examined the microstructure over the martensitic lath; however the measurements of packet size, block width and lath width are very vague. In addition the composition should be corrected and the tensile curves of the mechanical measurements need be reported. Then, the results can be verified through model, formulas and approaches. The paper at this stage will need lots of improvements. 大家?guī)兔纯,這個(gè)是要求大修么,前兩條作修改補(bǔ)充或者解釋還是可以的,但最后一條是要求文章往深入了作,這個(gè)應(yīng)該怎么修改比較好,文章里面結(jié)果證明主要是通過(guò)formulas然后結(jié)合一些前人的數(shù)據(jù),這里the results can be verified through model, formulas and approaches是認(rèn)為分析不足,要求進(jìn)一步證明么?還有Revised manuscript中回復(fù)審稿人意見(jiàn)有模板么,麻煩大家提供下。第一次投稿還請(qǐng)多多幫忙,謝謝。 |
銀蟲(chóng) (正式寫(xiě)手)
鐵桿木蟲(chóng) (正式寫(xiě)手)
鐵桿木蟲(chóng) (著名寫(xiě)手)
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按評(píng)審意見(jiàn)修改,下面是修改后回信的模板: Dear Editor, Thank you for your useful comments and suggestions on the language and structure of our manuscript. We have modified the manuscript accordingly, and detailed corrections are listed below point by point: 1) In its current state, the level of English throughout your manuscript does not meet the journal's required standard. Authors have the responsibility to present their papers in good English which can be understood by the journal's readership without difficulty. We have revised the WHOLE manuscript carefully and tried to avoid any grammar or syntax error. In addition, we have asked several colleagues who are skilled authors of English language papers to check the English. We believe that the language is now acceptable for the review process. 2) Please note that your abstract (250 words) has exceeded the maximum length of 150 words for research articles in this journal. The abstract has been revised and its word count is now 149. 3) Figures should be cited in sequential order in the main text. In your manuscript, Fig. 6 is provided but not cited. Please check and revise accordingly. Now all figures are provided and cited in sequence in the main text. 4) A cover letter should include the following statement: the manuscript has not been previously published, is not currently submitted for review to any other journal, and will not be submitted elsewhere before a decision is made by this journal. This is not seen in your cover letter. The required information is now included in the cover letter. 5) The manuscript, including references, figure captions and tables, should be typewritten in uniform lettering and sizing, and with double spacing throughout. We now have used uniform lettering and sizing throughout the manuscript, with double spacing. 6) Please note that the reference style must conform strictly to the journal’s Guide for Authors. To specify one problem in the reference list provided, journal names are not abbreviated and page span not provided. We have checked all the references and formatted them strictly according to the Guide for Authors. Especially, journal names have been abbreviated and page span provided. The manuscript has been resubmitted to your journal. We look forward to your positive response. Sincerely, |

木蟲(chóng) (著名寫(xiě)手)

鐵桿木蟲(chóng) (正式寫(xiě)手)
至尊木蟲(chóng) (文壇精英)

木蟲(chóng) (著名寫(xiě)手)

金蟲(chóng) (正式寫(xiě)手)
我以前很聰明的
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這個(gè)審稿人很給力啊,個(gè)人覺(jué)得給的意見(jiàn)蠻好的,不管期刊如何,審稿人都給了他自己的意見(jiàn),我覺(jué)得是個(gè)很負(fù)責(zé)的審稿人啊。 可能是表征不夠有說(shuō)服力,但我挺好奇,審稿人怎么沒(méi)有提你機(jī)理說(shuō)明不清呢? 說(shuō)明你的機(jī)理解釋他還是認(rèn)同的么,只是可能認(rèn)為你的文章要發(fā)表的話,系統(tǒng)性還需要加強(qiáng)。 曾經(jīng)有個(gè)師兄跟我講,回復(fù)時(shí)候不能一味地低聲下氣,否則被人看不起,認(rèn)為自己都沒(méi)信心,怎么發(fā)?但也不能太拽,否則直接拒回。 所以很難把握,只能一下收一下放。。。 不好意思,說(shuō)了等于白說(shuō),舉個(gè)小例子,前幾天有個(gè)師妹問(wèn)我,樣品處理前后孔結(jié)構(gòu)沒(méi)怎么變化怎么辦?(原先預(yù)計(jì)是會(huì)變化的) 我說(shuō):你可以這樣說(shuō):在樣品經(jīng)過(guò)。。。處理后,孔徑分布并沒(méi)有發(fā)生很大變化,說(shuō)明此處理方法并未對(duì)原有的孔徑造成破壞。。。 壞事說(shuō)成好事,看怎么說(shuō)了,祝樓主好運(yùn),二次審稿時(shí)候,審稿人心情好,直接錄用。。。加油!~~ |

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