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lrxfly鐵桿木蟲 (正式寫手)
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小弟8月初投出的，23號返回的審稿意見，這個期刊沒提大修小修，只有編輯說現(xiàn)階段發(fā)表不能還有兩個審稿意見，一個是英文方面的，The whole english of the paper should be improved，還有一些小的細(xì)節(jié)問題. 另外一個審稿人的意見就很不好處理了，具體如下 The authors examined the microstructure over the martensitic lath; however the measurements of packet size, block width and lath width are very vague. In addition the composition should be corrected and the tensile curves of the mechanical measurements need be reported. Then, the results can be verified through model, formulas and approaches. The paper at this stage will need lots of improvements. 大家?guī)兔纯�，這個是要求大修么，前兩條作修改補充或者解釋還是可以的，但最后一條是要求文章往深入了作，這個應(yīng)該怎么修改比較好，文章里面結(jié)果證明主要是通過formulas然后結(jié)合一些前人的數(shù)據(jù)，這里the results can be verified through model, formulas and approaches是認(rèn)為分析不足，要求進(jìn)一步證明么？還有Revised manuscript中回復(fù)審稿人意見有模板么，麻煩大家提供下。第一次投稿還請多多幫忙，謝謝。 |
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lrxfly(金幣+10): 非常感謝~~~~ 2011-08-26 16:11:52
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按評審意見修改，下面是修改后回信的模板： Dear Editor, Thank you for your useful comments and suggestions on the language and structure of our manuscript. We have modified the manuscript accordingly, and detailed corrections are listed below point by point: 1) In its current state, the level of English throughout your manuscript does not meet the journal's required standard. Authors have the responsibility to present their papers in good English which can be understood by the journal's readership without difficulty. We have revised the WHOLE manuscript carefully and tried to avoid any grammar or syntax error. In addition, we have asked several colleagues who are skilled authors of English language papers to check the English. We believe that the language is now acceptable for the review process. 2) Please note that your abstract (250 words) has exceeded the maximum length of 150 words for research articles in this journal. The abstract has been revised and its word count is now 149. 3) Figures should be cited in sequential order in the main text. In your manuscript, Fig. 6 is provided but not cited. Please check and revise accordingly. Now all figures are provided and cited in sequence in the main text. 4) A cover letter should include the following statement: the manuscript has not been previously published, is not currently submitted for review to any other journal, and will not be submitted elsewhere before a decision is made by this journal. This is not seen in your cover letter. The required information is now included in the cover letter. 5) The manuscript, including references, figure captions and tables, should be typewritten in uniform lettering and sizing, and with double spacing throughout. We now have used uniform lettering and sizing throughout the manuscript, with double spacing. 6) Please note that the reference style must conform strictly to the journal’s Guide for Authors. To specify one problem in the reference list provided, journal names are not abbreviated and page span not provided. We have checked all the references and formatted them strictly according to the Guide for Authors. Especially, journal names have been abbreviated and page span provided. The manuscript has been resubmitted to your journal. We look forward to your positive response. Sincerely, |
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lrxfly(金幣+10): 非常感謝~~~加油加油~~~ 2011-08-27 00:00:29
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這個審稿人很給力啊，個人覺得給的意見蠻好的，不管期刊如何，審稿人都給了他自己的意見，我覺得是個很負(fù)責(zé)的審稿人啊。 可能是表征不夠有說服力，但我挺好奇，審稿人怎么沒有提你機理說明不清呢？ 說明你的機理解釋他還是認(rèn)同的么，只是可能認(rèn)為你的文章要發(fā)表的話，系統(tǒng)性還需要加強。 曾經(jīng)有個師兄跟我講，回復(fù)時候不能一味地低聲下氣，否則被人看不起，認(rèn)為自己都沒信心，怎么發(fā)？但也不能太拽，否則直接拒回。 所以很難把握，只能一下收一下放。。。 不好意思，說了等于白說，舉個小例子，前幾天有個師妹問我，樣品處理前后孔結(jié)構(gòu)沒怎么變化怎么辦��？（原先預(yù)計是會變化的） 我說：你可以這樣說：在樣品經(jīng)過。。。處理后，孔徑分布并沒有發(fā)生很大變化，說明此處理方法并未對原有的孔徑造成破壞。。。 壞事說成好事，看怎么說了，祝樓主好運，二次審稿時候，審稿人心情好，直接錄用。。。加油！~~ |
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