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摘要:為提高PV/T系統(tǒng)太陽(yáng)能利用率,本文將鋁合金背板型光伏組件和自行設(shè)計(jì)制作的不銹鋼扁盒式集熱板相結(jié)合,用導(dǎo)熱硅膠加以粘接制成新型光伏光熱一體化(PV/T)復(fù)合系統(tǒng),該系統(tǒng)成功實(shí)現(xiàn)了光伏組件與集熱板之間良好的粘接性和熱傳導(dǎo),并在昆明地區(qū)對(duì)系統(tǒng)進(jìn)行室外測(cè)試,分析了系統(tǒng)在不同循環(huán)水量及不同天氣工況下運(yùn)行的光電光熱性能。結(jié)果表明,系統(tǒng)在m/Ac≈78kg/m2晴天工況下運(yùn)行,整體運(yùn)行效果優(yōu)于系統(tǒng)在m/Ac<78kg/m2晴天或m/Ac≈78kg/m2多云工況下運(yùn)行,其系統(tǒng)的平均電效率、熱效率、綜合效率及綜合性能效率分別在14%、37%、51%、72%左右,與獨(dú)立的光熱或光伏系統(tǒng)相比,還具有占地面積小、太陽(yáng)能利用率高、更經(jīng)濟(jì)等優(yōu)勢(shì)。 In order to improve the energy efficiency and to supply hot water as well as electricity, A novel hybrid photovoltaic/thermal solar system was designed with flat stainless box as solar heat collector combined with aluminum alloy backplane monocrystalline silicon PV components, so,there are good adhesion and insulation between the collector and PV module,Experiments were conducted the water system of this PV/T in kunming eara,The performance of this system was analyzed with different water mass and its different weather. Results show the electrical efficiency, thermal efficiency, total efficiency and the primary-energy saving efficiency of novel PV/T system is higher than m/Ac<78kg/m2 or cloudy,when the hot water load is 78kg/m2 or cloudy weather,and its efficiency respectively is about 14%,37%,51%,and 72%. Compared with pure PV system or the nature circulation of the solar water collector,Novel PV/T system has other advantages, such as, less occupied area, higher utilization of solar energy,lower expenditure,and so on. |
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英文論文的摘要一定要結(jié)構(gòu)和思路清晰,名詞最好不要被過(guò)長(zhǎng)的定語(yǔ)所修飾,修飾詞要盡量靠近被修飾的詞語(yǔ),拿第一句話來(lái)說(shuō): In order to improve the energy efficiency and to supply hot water and electricity, a novel hybrid photovoltaic/thermal solar system was designed with flat-stainless-box solar heat collectorscombined with aluminum alloy backplane monocrystalline silicon PV components, using the thermally conductive silica gel for adhesion. 我翻譯得也不大好, 1.但是后面的那個(gè)as well as可以改用and也不會(huì)影響句子意思,前面的and都加了to,后面的and連接的兩個(gè)名詞也非常相似,不會(huì)引起歧義,而句子少了兩個(gè)單詞。 2.可數(shù)名詞前一定要加冠詞,很多學(xué)了很多年英語(yǔ)的筒子經(jīng)常忽視這點(diǎn),也就是說(shuō)不知道怎么用冠詞。舉個(gè)例子而言,如果要您翻譯“書(shū)是有用的”如果翻譯成“Book is useful”就錯(cuò)了,要寫(xiě)成“A book is useful”或者“Books are useful” (參見(jiàn)錢(qián)歌川《英文疑難詳解P280》). 3. 中間的我就沒(méi)有看了,但是必須指出最后一句的一個(gè)硬傷,用了such as就不要用and so on或者etc.。很多人就是被中文的等等給帶進(jìn)去了(參見(jiàn)《英語(yǔ)慣用法詞典》葛傳槼著,such詞條) 4.另外提出的一點(diǎn)的是,such as和namely的區(qū)別,比如我學(xué)習(xí)了六門(mén)語(yǔ)言,如果后面列出了不到六種,可以用such as,但是如果六種都列出了,就用namely,注意用逗號(hào)隔開(kāi)。 5.然后就是邏輯主語(yǔ)的問(wèn)題,雖然科技論文中經(jīng)常用被動(dòng)式結(jié)構(gòu),懸垂結(jié)構(gòu)的邏輯主語(yǔ)的動(dòng)作發(fā)出者經(jīng)常會(huì)與句子的邏輯主語(yǔ)矛盾,雖然在科技論文中可以容忍一些,但是盡量還是要保證邏輯主語(yǔ)和句子主語(yǔ)的一致性。具體可以參見(jiàn)平卡姆的《中式英語(yǔ)之鑒》。一句兩句話很難說(shuō)清楚,把握這幾個(gè)原則,確定好專(zhuān)業(yè)術(shù)語(yǔ),譯文保證70分以上肯定沒(méi)有問(wèn)題的。 本人能夠找到出處的盡量提供,但是找不到的只是我曾經(jīng)考證過(guò),但是不記得是在哪些資料里。上述的錢(qián)歌川和葛傳槼都是大家,十幾年才寫(xiě)一本書(shū)的那種,民國(guó)時(shí)期的專(zhuān)家,可信度很大。 然后建議各位寫(xiě)論文的沒(méi)有時(shí)間的話先看下《風(fēng)格的要素》(the elements of style)這本書(shū),老外寫(xiě)的,幾十頁(yè),幾塊錢(qián),網(wǎng)上也有電子版本,兩個(gè)小時(shí)就看完了,但是絕對(duì)有很大的收獲。 |
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