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幫忙看看這1小段話有沒有語法錯(cuò)誤
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| Mean values of the sensory scores of the finished products can be observed in Table 1. It can be seen the score of sea cucumbers dried by EHD were color (2.12±0.12), appearance (2.16±0.19), texture (2.31±0.28), flavor (2.22±0.0.27), respectively, whereas the samples dried oven were color (1.68±0.0.26), appearance (1.58±0.25), texture (1.99±0.25), flavor (1.89±0.0.41), respectively |
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有點(diǎn)直譯的味道。幾個(gè)意見供參考: 1. 帶respectively的句法應(yīng)該是: A, B and C, respectively. 你少了and 2. 論文中一般不說...observed in table...而是 ... are shown in Table 1. 3. 一般不說it can seen the score, 而是直接說The score....來描述你的結(jié)果。 4. 最后一句數(shù)據(jù)描述語法前后不太一致,前一句主語是the scores, 后一句whereas從句主語是the sample,具體怎么改要看你需要表達(dá)的意思來定。 |
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