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主編說有錯(cuò)誤"In general, the encapulation of fluorescence substance by silica can be realized by the stöber process [20,21] or reverse microemulsion method [22,23]". 是不是把method改為methods呀。 主編說有錯(cuò)誤"They exhibit stability, high brightness and sensitive while were proved to be a pH sensor in basic solution". 我改為"They exhibit stability, high brightness and sensitive when they were used to be a pH sensor in basic solution".不知可對(duì) 主編說有錯(cuò)誤"These solutions were adjust to ionic strength from 0.1 mol/L to 0.5 mol/L". 我改為"These solutions were adjusted ionic strength from 0.1 mol/L to 0.5 mol/L".不知可對(duì) 主編說有錯(cuò)誤"The silica shells offer a stability vehicle, and the nanoparticles are also biocompatible, nontoxic, water soluble, no pollution and easy separated by centrifugation.". 我改為"The silica shells offer a stability vehicle, and they are also biocompatible, nontoxic, water soluble, no pollution and easy separated by centrifugation.".不知可對(duì) 主編說有錯(cuò)誤"The product was washing with ethanol and water several times to remove the unreacted chemicals". 真不知錯(cuò)在哪。 主編說有錯(cuò)誤"The fluorescence intensity of the B-doped silica nanoparticles strongly affected by changing pH". 真不知錯(cuò)在哪。 有勞各位高人指點(diǎn)！謝謝！ |
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jsliu880: 金幣+3, 謝謝 2013-08-17 11:52:51
jsliu880: 金幣+3, 謝謝 2013-08-17 11:52:51
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主編說有錯(cuò)誤"They exhibit stability, high brightness and sensitive while were proved to be a pH sensor in basic solution". They exhibit stability, high brightness and sensitivity when used as pH sensors in basic solution. 主編說有錯(cuò)誤"These solutions were adjust to ionic strength from 0.1 mol/L to 0.5 mol/L". Ionic strength of these solutions was adjusted from 0.1 mol/L to 0.5 mol/L. 主編說有錯(cuò)誤"The silica shells offer a stability vehicle, and the nanoparticles are also biocompatible, nontoxic, water soluble, no pollution and easy separated by centrifugation.". The silica shells offer a stability vehicle(stability vehicle啥意思呀) which endows the nanoparticles with the features of biocompatability, nontoxicity, water solubility, no pollution and easy separation by centrifugation. 主編說有錯(cuò)誤"The product was washing with ethanol and water several times to remove the unreacted chemicals". The product was washED with ethanol and water several times to remove the unreacted chemicals.(乙醇和水的洗滌有先后嗎，還是用乙醇水溶液？) 主編說有錯(cuò)誤"The fluorescence intensity of the B-doped silica nanoparticles strongly affected by changing pH". The fluorescence intensity of the B-doped silica nanoparticles WAS strongly affected by pH values. |
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jsliu880: 金幣+3, 謝謝 2013-08-17 11:53:04
jsliu880: 金幣+3, 謝謝 2013-08-17 11:53:04
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1. In general, the encapulation of fluorescence molecules with silica can be realized with the Stöber process [20,21] or the reverse microemulsion method [22,23]. 熒光物質(zhì)是Chinglish吧，我沒在文獻(xiàn)中見過這么表述的，此外一些介詞的用法需注意。 2. They exhibit good stability, high brightness and sensitivity when used as a pH sensor in the basic solution". Sensitive是表示靈敏度吧，所以要用名詞，其次時(shí)態(tài)需前后對(duì)應(yīng)。 3. These solutions were adjust to ionic strength from 0.1 mol/L to 0.5 mol/L. The ionic strength of the solutions was adjusted ranging from 0.1 mol/L to 0.5 mol/L. 4. The silica shells offer a stability vehicle, and the nanoparticles are also biocompatible, nontoxic, water soluble, no pollution and easy separated by centrifugation.". 不知道你前半句表達(dá)的意思。整個(gè)句子是不是就是要說明這種納米二氧化硅包覆的熒光探針具有的優(yōu)勢(shì)？ 5. The product was washing with ethanol and water several times to remove the unreacted chemicals. washed，其次洗的方法的描述是相繼呢（water后加successively）還是交替（water后加alternatively） 6. The fluorescence intensity of the B-doped silica nanoparticles strongly affected by changing pH. The fluorescence intensity of the B-doped silica nanoparticles was greatly affected by the changing pH.應(yīng)該用被動(dòng)語態(tài)。 |
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