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請幫忙修改一句英文,謝謝
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審稿人說下面這句話英文表述有問題,請幫忙改改,謝謝! The X is1.40, 1.69, 1.78 and 2.43, corresponding to Zn-1, Zn-3, Zn-5 and Zn-8, which increases as Zn content becoming denser. (中文意思是:X的值分別是1.40, 1.69, 1.78 和 2.43,對應(yīng)樣品是Zn-1, Zn-3, Zn-5 和Zn-8,說明X的值隨著鋅濃度增加而增大) |
鐵桿木蟲 (正式寫手)
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個(gè)人理解審稿人可能有以下問題: 1. as Zn content becoming denser 語法上有問題, 應(yīng)該是as Zn content becomes ... 2. 濃度應(yīng)該是concentration, content是量,不是這個(gè)意思。用concentration一般說high 3. 綜合1 和2 這個(gè)從句應(yīng)該是 as Zn concentration becomes higher 4. 原句用increases 是單數(shù),應(yīng)該是復(fù)數(shù) 總體上,建議如下: The X values of 1.40, 1.69, 1.78 and 2.43 correspond to sample Zn-1, Zn-3, Zn-5 and Zn-8 respectively and they increase as Zn concentration becomes higher |

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| The X values are 1.40, 1.69, 1.78 and 2.43, corresponding to the samples Zn-1, Zn-3, Zn-5 and Zn-8, illustrate the value of X increases with the concentration of zinc。原文既然X有4個(gè)值,謂語應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)的。主句為最后一句!前面的翻譯為主語從句邏輯性更強(qiáng)。! |

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