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給外教寫了一封信，各位幫忙看看 Dear Doctor Johnson, How are you?I'm Jane. First of all, thanks for teaching us English.We learned English together and improved a lot. I just want to let you konw that I don't agree with the grade that you gave me.Well, my English is not fluent,but I have been studying English every class. I answered your questions and had english conversation with my classmates. When I answered your question, I thought twice to ensure that my answer was right. I was afraid that the answer was wrong.My English had become better. I think that my grade should be eighty to ninty. Thank you very much for your consideration,and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely yours, Jane |
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我覺(jué)得基本可以。意思表達(dá)了,也沒(méi)有不太禮貌的地方。本身就是對(duì)他的評(píng)分不滿，所以直接表達(dá)我認(rèn)為還是可以的。當(dāng)然，不同的人表達(dá)方式不一樣，但是不見得非得一樣。個(gè)人有個(gè)人的表達(dá)方式。以下是在樓主基礎(chǔ)上，我覺(jué)得比較妥貼的表達(dá)方式： Dear Doctor Johnson, How are you? My name is Jane，in your ... Class. First of all, thanks for teaching us English. Under your guidance and help, I have improved a lot over the semester. However, I must say that I never expected to get a grade as low as ... . Well, my English is not as fluent, but I have been studying English hard every class. I answered your questions (actively) and made great efforts to practise speaking English with my classmates. Whenever I answered your question, I thought twice to ensure that my answer was right because I was afraid that the answer might have been wrong. My English had bettered a lot compared to last semester. Therefore, I think that my grade should be eighty to ninety instead of ... I'd appreciate it very much if you take what I said into consideration. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Sincerely yours, Jane |
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北方西毒: 金幣+3, ★★★很有幫助 2014-05-20 17:16:24
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首先，不能一上來(lái)就來(lái)一句“I just want to let you konw that I don't agree with the grade that you gave me.” 這顯得不太禮貌。老師給分基本不是沒(méi)有根據(jù)的。其次，你說(shuō)你的英語(yǔ)已有改善，在那些方面表現(xiàn)出來(lái)了，舉個(gè)例子啥的啊。要是我，應(yīng)該先說(shuō)：老師，我對(duì)你所給的成績(jī)存在疑問(wèn)，比“don't agree with you ! ”要委婉。讓后說(shuō)明自己做出的一些努力啥的，讓后說(shuō)一下Ta所給的成績(jī)對(duì)你的影響，比如GPA,評(píng)獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金啥的。這樣曉之以理動(dòng)之以情，讓Ta再考慮考慮。最后再說(shuō)一下不好意思打擾Ta 了，真的非常感謝Ta這段時(shí)間的教課。真誠(chéng)的希望他能給你一個(gè)更好地成績(jī)，不能說(shuō)80-90這么樣子。威脅ta似得。 |
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阿飛1990乖乖: 金幣+2, 感謝蟲友熱心應(yīng)助 2014-05-20 21:48:08
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Dear Doctor Johnson, How are you?I'm Jane. First of all, thanks for teaching us English.We learned English together and I have improved a lot with your help. I just want to let you konw that I don't agree with you about the remaks.Though my English is not fluent, I have been studying English every class. I answered your questions and had English conversations with my classmates. When I answered your questions, I always thought twice to ensure that my answer was proper.My English have become better. I want to know the reason why I got so bad remarks. I would appreciate it if you can tell the reason.In that way I can make more progress. Sincerely yours, Jane |
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