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我根據(jù)大家的意見修改了一下套瓷信,希望大家繼續(xù)幫我提意見,不勝感激! 已有3人參與
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大家給我的套磁信提了很多有用的意見,非常感謝,我根據(jù)大家的意見修改了一下套瓷信,本人的英文水平不好,希望大家繼續(xù)幫我提意見,不勝感激! Looking for a PhD position in your group Dear Prof. XX It is of great honor for me to contact you for the application of a PhD position in your group because I have found my research background matches your research in the field of plasmonic very well. My name is Weixiang Ye, a master student majored in Microelectronics & Solid State Electronics from Nankai University, P. R. China. I have read your homepage and read some of your papers (e.g., “XX” and “XX”), from which I was inspired a lot. Based on my research experiences, I think that it could be a good idea to use XX to enhance the locally electromagetic field, which is an effective way to improve the sensitivity of plasmonic gas sensor in your papers. We can build a dual measurement system which combines XX and XX to report two parameters in one local chemical reaction. Therefore, I write this email to inquire the possibility in doing research as a Ph.D. student in your research group after I complete my graduate study at June next year (2015). My research experience ranged from synthesis of silver and gold spheres, surface plasmon resonance biosensors, to the microchip. Till now, I have some output for the research. I have finished five academic papers in this field. Finally, thank you for taking time off your busy schedule to read this letter. I have enclosed my CV, research proposal and supplementary information for my CV in this email. Please feel free to contact me if it is interesting to you. Your favorable consideration of my application will be greatly appreciated. Best regards, XX |
\"潛心\"研究。。。 | 投稿與論文寫作 |
銅蟲 (正式寫手)
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第一段去了吧。 然后第二段里面: Based on my research experiences, I think that it could be a good idea to use XX to enhance the locally electromagetic field, which is an effective way to improve the sensitivity of plasmonic gas sensor in your papers. We can build a dual measurement system which combines XX and XX to report two parameters in one local chemical reaction. (這里說了一些對教授現(xiàn)在研究的看法和點子,但個人感覺后句和這句有點連不上。)Therefore, I write this email to inquire the possibility in doing research as a Ph.D. student in your research group after I complete my graduate study at June next year (2015). (后句說,因此我想到你組里讀博士。和前面那句的聯(lián)系在哪喃??感覺你其實想表達(dá)。我有個什么什么點子感覺對你實驗室現(xiàn)有技術(shù)有所提高,因此我想到你實驗室從事著方面的工作,實現(xiàn)我說的這個點子)。 這樣比前面扯了一堆,然后突然來個所以我想去你實驗室讀博更直接。(好吧,我們的文化比較含蓄。) 其他的都還好 祝樓主好運,加油。 |
金蟲 (著名寫手)
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銀蟲 (小有名氣)
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樓主,第一段不用那么多套話,直接就說你想申請他的研究生。 你第二段說到他的research對你有很積極的影響,你可以補充說下在你那一方面的研究有影響,比如ideas啊,證明方法之類的。然后說完之后就直接把你的第四段放后面,簡要介紹你的research experience和科研成果,發(fā)表的如果是國際期刊的話可以把雜志名稱寫出來。。 說完之后接下來就直接"Based on my research experience, ...." 然后直接說“You can find my detailed research proposal in the attachment”,然后表明自己可以"benefit from your teaching and guidance in achieving my academic goals" 最后一段感謝他讀你的信,希望可以得到他的回復(fù)就可以了,比如“Please give me a feedback at your convenience, I'll appreciate any time you can give me.”。 |

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