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1. cancer deaths in North America are mainly from lung cancer, probably because of high rates of smoking 2. Dietary factors are thought to contribute to low death rates in Colombia and Venezuela 3. with one of the highest smoking rates in South America, Uruguay also has the greatest mortality 4. low cancer mortality in Africa reflects the region's high burden of infectious diseases 5. low incomes and limited rural access to cancer care help to explain high mortality rates in Russia and China |
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1. cancer deaths in North America are mainly from lung cancer, probably because of high rates of smoking 在北美,癌癥死亡主要來(lái)自肺癌,可能因?yàn)槠涓呶鼰熉省?br /> 2. Dietary factors are thought to contribute to low death rates in Colombia and Venezuela 在哥倫比亞和委內(nèi)瑞拉低死亡率被認(rèn)為得益于飲食因素。 3. with one of the highest smoking rates in South America, Uruguay also has the greatest mortality 在南美,烏拉圭是吸煙率最高的國(guó)家之一,死亡率也最高。 4. low cancer mortality in Africa reflects the region's high burden of infectious diseases 在非洲低癌癥死亡率反映了該地區(qū)的高傳染性疾病負(fù)擔(dān)。 5. low incomes and limited rural access to cancer care help to explain high mortality rates in Russia and China 在俄羅斯和中國(guó),高死亡率是因?yàn)榈褪杖牒娃r(nóng)村地區(qū)有限的癌癥護(hù)理資源。 |
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1. 在北美,肺癌是癌癥死亡病例的主要因素,這可能和較高的吸煙率有關(guān) 2. 在哥倫比亞和委內(nèi)瑞拉,合理膳食降低了死亡率 3. 烏拉圭是南美吸煙率最高的國(guó)家之一,也是死亡率最高的國(guó)家 4. 非洲的低癌癥死亡率表面了該地區(qū)傳染病肆虐 5. 低收入和鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)得不到良好的癌癥救助,是造成俄羅斯和中國(guó)高死亡率的重要原因 |
鐵蟲(chóng) (職業(yè)作家)
原文很好,尤其是第四句,難翻,但很有主見(jiàn) ![]() 第五句算是批評(píng),建議改寫(xiě)成: Low incomes and limited rural access to cancer care ARE TO BLAME FOR high mortality rates in Russia and China 第二句二樓編譯得好 略改原文:Dietary factors may have helped keep death rates low in ... 要更肯定,則 ... may have kept ... [ 注: may 比 might 肯定 ] ---- 第五句的客氣說(shuō)法: 鄉(xiāng)下高收入工作少,有錢(qián)也難及時(shí)就醫(yī),造成俄羅斯和中國(guó)大陸全國(guó)癌癥死亡率居住高不下 第四句: 非洲急性傳染病過(guò)于普遍,癌癥死亡率相對(duì)較低 |
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