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lPPS 涂層系統(tǒng)的阻尼值(缺陷較多)減去ELD 涂層系統(tǒng)的阻尼值(幾乎沒有缺陷)近似等于缺陷產(chǎn)生的阻尼值。 The damping value of the LPPS coating system with more defects minus the damping value of ELD coating system with few defects approximately equal to the damping value produced by defects. |

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The difference between the damping values of the LPPS coating system with more defects and ELD coating systems with few defects approximately equals to the damping value produced by defects. 用你的原句也是可以的,只是將equal改為equals便可: The damping value of the LPPS coating system with more defects minus the damping value of ELD coating system with few defects approximately equalS to the damping value produced by defects. |
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The damping value of the LPPS coating system with more defects minus that of ELD coating system with nearly no defects,then we get an approximate produced by pure defects。 版主說的缺陷一次可以改成imperfection,看起來比較高大上。覺得這句話沒什么問題,但是是中國式思維,有些重復,可以用復合句的地方版主以后要用一些高級的復合句,這樣就很好了。加油! |

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