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真悲劇平男木蟲 (正式寫手)
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我想請問一下這句話的兩種說法那種比較符合英語書面語的表達(dá)方式？
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最近在寫推薦信，有句話不知怎么寫，想請教一下那種寫法比較符合native的書面語寫法。 第一種： His two years of intense efforts led to his two new papers, one of them, "論文名字", has been published in 雜志名字, whilst the other, "論文名字", is under review in 雜志名字. 或者是第二種： His two years of intense efforts led to his two new papers: "論文名字" which has been published in 雜志名字, and "論文名字" which is under review in 雜志名字. 因?yàn)樾枰颜撐牡臉?biāo)題加進(jìn)去，所以請問哪種說法比較好？ 如果有更好的寫法，那么應(yīng)該怎么寫呢？ |
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真悲劇平男: 金幣+50, ★★★很有幫助 2014-12-27 09:56:33
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Both are not that native. How about this. After two years' hard work, he finished two papers. One is title, which is published in journal. The other is title, which has been submitted to journal and is under review. Good luck. [ 發(fā)自手機(jī)版 http://www.gaoyang168.com/3g ] |
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真悲劇平男: 金幣+20, ★有幫助 2014-12-27 09:56:41
既然是推薦信，適當(dāng)吹一吹。  Due to his hard work in the past two years, he produced two papers with high quality. One of them, ' title ', has already been published in ' ....journal ', while the other one, ' ... title ' , has been submitted to '... journal ' , which I believe will have a promising result. |
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