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投了篇SCI,審稿人給了幾條意見(jiàn),還望大家?guī)臀曳治鲆幌? 已有2人參與
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在“Journal of Cardiovascular Pharmacology”投了一篇文章,修改意見(jiàn)只有一個(gè)reviewer的。意見(jiàn)如下,想讓大家?guī)臀曳治鲆幌隆?br />
Reviewer #1: This is a beginning of dissection of the pathway involved in the sympathetic nervous system's role in fibrotic expansion in the heart. There are some components that could be added to strengthen the conclusions made here.(此處的意思是讓補(bǔ)充實(shí)驗(yàn)么?具體也沒(méi)說(shuō)補(bǔ)充哪方面的實(shí)驗(yàn)啊,感覺(jué)很迷茫) Additionally, THE PAPER MUST BE REWRITTEN BY A NATIVE ENGLISH SPEAKER FOR PORPER SYNTAX AND GRAMMAR. 1. A study by Hirota et al in lung recently came out looking at lung fibroblasts. It would be interesting to have this discussed in the context of the work you have done in the heart. (Hirota et al, Gene expression profiling of lung myofibroblasts reveals the anti-fibrotic effects of cyclosporine. Tohoku J. of Exp Med 233(4) pg 283-293, 2014).(此處的意思是讓引用此文獻(xiàn),我已經(jīng)引用了,但是在回復(fù)意見(jiàn)時(shí)該怎么夸獎(jiǎng)此文章?最好能給個(gè)英文版的模版,本人英語(yǔ)不太好) 2. AKT, MAPK and ERK have all been shown to be involved in fibrosis and myofibroblast activation. Are they affected by either NE or by inhibition through one of the drugs tested here? 此處提及的AKT, MAPK and ERK在NE刺激是是有反應(yīng)的,這有文獻(xiàn)報(bào)道,我沒(méi)有檢測(cè),那么我回復(fù)意見(jiàn)時(shí)是不是要把人家的文獻(xiàn)列出來(lái)?解釋自己沒(méi)有做的原因? 3. Pannexin's have been shown to be important in activation of myofibroblasts in the heart. Are there changes in pannexins in this study? 此處提及的Pannexin跟我的研究沒(méi)有太大關(guān)系,我沒(méi)有檢測(cè)此指標(biāo)。那么我該怎么回復(fù)審稿人? |
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沒(méi)有明確讓補(bǔ)實(shí)驗(yàn),所以就不用考慮這個(gè)問(wèn)題了,那此處何意?我的理解是針對(duì)下面的1、2、3而言的。 對(duì)于下面的1、2、3,其實(shí)不難回答。之所以會(huì)提出這三條,特別是前兩條,是因?yàn)槟阕约寒?dāng)初沒(méi)有對(duì)結(jié)果結(jié)論展開(kāi)較為深入的討論,可能僅是無(wú)關(guān)痛癢的泛泛而言。 比如1、審稿人提出這條不是說(shuō)你引用與否,而是結(jié)果該文獻(xiàn)與你自己的結(jié)果進(jìn)行深入的討論。至于2,這個(gè)問(wèn)題的提出也是源于你沒(méi)有說(shuō)明該說(shuō)明的結(jié)論(NE的作用),修改時(shí)盡可能詳細(xì)的補(bǔ)上就行。 對(duì)于第三點(diǎn),沒(méi)有測(cè)就是沒(méi)有測(cè)。這沒(méi)有什么,直接告訴他們就行。事實(shí)是,參與任何生理、病理過(guò)程(你這里是myofibroblast activation)的pathway有很多,每一pathway中又有許許多多的factors,不可能也沒(méi)有必要對(duì)所以有作用的都去做一遍。回答時(shí)只要了解性的提出個(gè)人看法就好。 英語(yǔ)部分當(dāng)然需要好好改,這可能也是不能進(jìn)行細(xì)致討論的一個(gè)原因。 Good luck, btw |
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