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求助,投稿英文論文語法與句子間架結(jié)構(gòu)問題。英文功底好大俠能否給個指點! 已有1人參與
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如題,書到用時方恨少.... 學(xué)了三十幾年的母語,每次撰寫漢語學(xué)術(shù)論文,撇開參考文獻(xiàn),拍腦袋是寫不出來幾句像樣的句子的。母語的撰寫功底都是如此的差。真是很慚愧! 最近投了一篇外文文章,審稿人&編輯說有些句子存在語法和間架結(jié)構(gòu)的問題。我自己也在修改,但還想征求更多人的意見,請求英文功底修煉較好的大俠,給咱賞上兩眼,指點,指點吧! 見下: 1.The most sophisticated of those mechanisms deploy antibodies and killer cells to those recognize and eliminate specific invaders, respectively. 2.However, a study of the peptides from plants, especially as far as their antitumor, antioxidant well as anti-hyperglycemia activities are concerned, has not progressed as quickly as in the case of other compounds. 3.Despite of they are small low molecular weight proteins, their achieve antibiotics function using an extremely diverse range of structural and compositions motifs. 4. It observe on conductivity and potential independence of channel situation and conclude that bioactive seeds peptides from semen cuscutate 5.The results shown that samples from carrot seeds and Anethum graveolens that assumed peptides increase conductivity of BLM with formation of single channel of two types. 6.it show decreased virulence the possibility that the pathogen defense system against antimicrobial peptides may show specificity toward the peptide type has been suggested |
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語法錯誤不少,先把語法解決了吧,每個詞/短語做到有理有據(jù),建議借鑒一下參考文獻(xiàn)里的語句 [ 發(fā)自小木蟲客戶端 ] |
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