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kakarote金蟲 (文壇精英)
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求一句話的漢譯英,美化。
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盡管在刻蝕過程中形成的較強(qiáng)化學(xué)活性的表面結(jié)構(gòu)(主要是不飽和鍵)會與空氣中的氣氛反應(yīng)生成較為復(fù)雜的化學(xué)結(jié)構(gòu)表面,但這一納米薄層很容易通過離子束轟擊或者濕法刻蝕的方法去除。 Although the structure of etched surface which has strong chemical activities (mailnly unsaturated bonds) can be very reactive with air to form complex surface with chemical structure, the nano layer can be removed easily by ion beam bombardment or wet etching. |
至尊木蟲 (知名作家)
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你的這個句子我覺得不是英語本身的問題,而可能需要從內(nèi)容上重新考慮一下,這也許與我對你的內(nèi)容不熟悉所產(chǎn)生的感覺: 1、前半句中structure和surface間的關(guān)系(這個應(yīng)該沒有問題),我的問題是,到底是structure還是surface與air反應(yīng)?我的理解應(yīng)該是surface,但你的句子是structure(也許二者無需嚴(yán)格區(qū)分),需要你再考慮一下。 2、can be very reactive with air改成can react with air可能更好些(并非原則性問題) 3、又是內(nèi)容問題:從句子說法上看,后半句的nano layer就是前半句中的complex surface,但是,從語言上來說,在句子前后不加說明的名詞變換是否跳躍太大,也需要考慮一下。 |
至尊木蟲 (知名作家)
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如果你同意我所說的“1”,可以考慮: Although the etched surface which has a structure with strong chemical activities (mailnly unsaturated bonds) can react with air to form complex surface with chemical structure...... 或者: Although the etched surface,a structure with strong chemical activities (mailnly unsaturated bonds),can react with air to form complex surface with chemical structure...... |
木蟲 (正式寫手)
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感覺這句話的意思是刻蝕過程中形成的表面結(jié)構(gòu)容易與空氣反應(yīng)生成具有復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的表面,而形成的這一層又容易去除。故我的翻譯如下,僅供參考: Although the surface structure formed during etching has strong chemical activities (mailnly unsaturated bonds) which can react with air to form complex surface with chemical structure, but this nano layer can be easily removed by ion beam bombarding or wet etching. |

至尊木蟲 (著名寫手)
| Although the etching process generated a relatively active surface structure (mainly due to unsaturated bonds), which interacts with oxygen in the air to form a surface with complex chemical structures, however, such a layer in manometers thickness can be readily removed by ion beam bombardment or wet etching. |

至尊木蟲 (著名寫手)
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改一下: Although the etching process generates a relatively active surface structure (mainly due to unsaturated bonds), which interacts with oxygen in the air to form a surface with complex chemical structures, however, such a layer in manometers thickness can be readily removed by ion beam bombardment or wet etching. |

至尊木蟲 (著名寫手)
| Although the surface structure generated during etching has strong chemical activities (mailnly unsaturated bonds), which exposed in air can be transformed to complex surface with chemical structure, such nano layer can be easily removed by ion beam bombarding or wet etching. |

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