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1、Hf:Yb: Ho: LiNbO3 crystals with various [Li]/[Nb] ratios (0.85, 0.94, 1.05, 1.20 and 1.38) were grown by Czochraski technique. In this Report, we describe the defect structure and dopant occupancy of Hf : Yb: Ho: LiNbO3 crystals by IR transmission spectrum. 2、 The effective distribution coefficient of Hf4+ decreases with the increase of [Li]/[Nb] ratio in the melts，while the effective distribution coefficients of Yb3+ and Ho3+ increase as [Li]/[Nb] ratio increases in the melts, which are less than 1. 3、The light-induced scattering of Hf: Yb: Ho: LiNbO3 crystals was quantitatively measured via the incident exposure energy. The exposure energy of Hf: Yb: Ho: LiNbO3 crystal with the [Li]/[Nb] ratios of 1.38 is 763.84 J/cm2, approximately 326 folds than that of the Hf: Yb: Ho: LiNbO3 crystal ([Li]/[Nb]=0.85) in magnitude. 文章摘要，表述越精彩越好，重點是第二三句一定要改。麻煩大神了。拜謝�。。�！ |
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hxx313021483
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- 應助: 0 (幼兒園)
- 金幣: 1680.3
- 帖子: 23
- 在線: 14.5小時
- 蟲號: 2709391
- 注冊: 2013-10-09
- 性別: MM
- 專業(yè): 凝聚態(tài)物性I:結構、力學和
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你好，打擾下我想問問這句話 The effective distribution coefficient of dopant ion is calculated by comparing the concentration of dopant ion in crystal and the concentration of dopant ion in melt. 可以這么寫嗎 The effective distribution coefficient of dopant ion is calculated by comparing the concentration of dopant ion in crystal and in melt. 或者有什么更好的寫法嗎 |
4樓2015-07-23 15:56:53
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- 翻譯EPI: 1690
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怎么看上去這么熟悉？難道都是同一個人？ 1、Report為何用大寫？we describe xxx by IR transmission spectrum讀上去很怪，可以考慮改成：The defect structure and dopant occupancy of Hf : Yb: Ho: LiNbO3 crystals were determined by IR transmission spectrum. 2. 這不是另一個帖子的內(nèi)容嗎？那里我的建議是： The effective distribution coefficient decreases for Hf4+ and increases for Yb3+ and Ho3+ with the increase of [Li]/[Nb] ratio in the melts. In all cases, [Li]/[Nb] ratio is less than 1. 3. ...326 folds than that of the...改為...326 folds more than that of the...；另外was、is等時態(tài)要統(tǒng)一。 |
2樓2015-07-22 20:49:13
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hxx313021483: 金幣+30, 翻譯EPI+1, ★★★很有幫助 2015-07-23 10:58:34
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第二個調(diào)整一下： 1、Report為何用大寫？we describe xxx by IR transmission spectrum讀上去很怪，可以考慮改成：The defect structure and dopant occupancy of Hf : Yb: Ho: LiNbO3 crystals were determined by IR transmission spectrum. 2. 這不是另一個帖子的內(nèi)容嗎？那里我的建議是： The effective distribution coefficient decreases for Hf4+ and increases for Yb3+ and Ho3+ with the increase of [Li]/[Nb] ratio in the melts. In all cases, the effective distribution coefficients are less than 1. 3. ...326 folds than that of the...改為...326 folds more than that of the...；另外was、is等時態(tài)要統(tǒng)一。 |
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