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有幾句話(huà),大家?guī)兔纯捶g的哪里不對(duì),或者怎么說(shuō)更好。
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1.The oxidation resistance temperature UFD/SiO2 composites was at least 140℃ higher than that of the pristine UFDs, while it changed relatively little as the shell thickness increased from 10 nm to 50 nm and reached a maximum around 597℃. 2.UFD/SiO2 composites with shell thickness of about 10 nm exhibited better suspension stability among the pristine UFDs and other UFD/SiO2 composites with thicker shell thicknesses, which can stably suspend in 0.5 mol/L multi-component inorganic salt solution for 24 h. 3.Because all organic groups would be eliminated at this temperature [19], which facilitates the observation of the changes in UFD/SiO2 composites during heating process. 4.Almost no silica shell formed on the surfaces of the UFDs with the ammonia addition of 0.5 ml. |

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Because all organic groups would be eliminated at this temperature [19], which facilitates the observation of the changes in UFD/SiO2 composites during heating process. 其他幾個(gè)提的意見(jiàn)都很好,這句話(huà)我想表達(dá)的本意是:由于所有的官能團(tuán)在這個(gè)溫度被除掉,這利于對(duì)UFD/SiO2 composites 在加熱過(guò)程中發(fā)生的變化進(jìn)行觀察。 那么后面這半句怎么改合適呢 |

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1.The oxidation resistance temperature 【OF】 UFD/SiO2 composites was at least 140℃ higher than that of the pristine UFDs, while it changed relatively little as the shell thickness increased from 10 nm to 50 nm and reached a maximum around 597℃. 2.UFD/SiO2 composites with shell thickness of about 10 nm exhibited 【A】 better suspension stability among the pristine UFDs and other UFD/SiO2 composites with thicker shell thicknesses, which can stably suspend in 0.5 mol/L multi-component inorganic salt solution for 24 h. (這句話(huà)后半句的which所指有些模糊,可以另起一句,簡(jiǎn)單的用 It can stably...描述) 3.Because all organic groups would be eliminated at this temperature [19], which facilitates the observation of the changes in UFD/SiO2 composites during heating process.(這句話(huà)本應(yīng)因果關(guān)系從句,后半句用which引導(dǎo)不合適。可以改為下面的說(shuō)法。另外,后半句的內(nèi)容我不能完全理解,我試圖按照我的理解給予修改,不知是否合適: Because all organic groups would be eliminated at this temperature [19], 【the observed changes in UFD/SiO2 composites during heating process was facilitated.】 4.Almost no silica shell formed on the surfaces of the UFDs with the 【addition of 0.5 ml ammonia】. 我覺(jué)得這句話(huà)改成下面的樣子更好些: 4.Almost no silica shell formed on the surfaces of the UFDs 【was observed】 with the 【addition of 0.5 ml ammonia】 |
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顯然是我沒(méi)有理解你的原意! Because...,which...這種句型是不存在的。可以簡(jiǎn)單的把because去掉就可以了,前半句陳述事實(shí)(其實(shí)事實(shí)本身就是原因),后半句說(shuō)明結(jié)果: All organic groups would be eliminated at this temperature [19], which facilitates the observation of the changes in UFD/SiO2 composites during heating process. |
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