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1.The oxidation resistance temperature UFD/SiO2 composites was at least 140℃ higher than that of the pristine UFDs, while it changed relatively little as the shell thickness increased from 10 nm to 50 nm and reached a maximum around 597℃. 2.UFD/SiO2 composites with shell thickness of about 10 nm exhibited better suspension stability among the pristine UFDs and other UFD/SiO2 composites with thicker shell thicknesses, which can stably suspend in 0.5 mol/L multi-component inorganic salt solution for 24 h. 3.Because all organic groups would be eliminated at this temperature [19], which facilitates the observation of the changes in UFD/SiO2 composites during heating process. 4.Almost no silica shell formed on the surfaces of the UFDs with the ammonia addition of 0.5 ml. |
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顯然是我沒有理解你的原意！ Because...，which...這種句型是不存在的�？梢院�(jiǎn)單的把because去掉就可以了，前半句陳述事實(shí)（其實(shí)事實(shí)本身就是原因），后半句說(shuō)明結(jié)果： All organic groups would be eliminated at this temperature [19], which facilitates the observation of the changes in UFD/SiO2 composites during heating process. |
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1.The oxidation resistance temperature 【OF】 UFD/SiO2 composites was at least 140℃ higher than that of the pristine UFDs, while it changed relatively little as the shell thickness increased from 10 nm to 50 nm and reached a maximum around 597℃. 2.UFD/SiO2 composites with shell thickness of about 10 nm exhibited 【A】 better suspension stability among the pristine UFDs and other UFD/SiO2 composites with thicker shell thicknesses, which can stably suspend in 0.5 mol/L multi-component inorganic salt solution for 24 h. （這句話后半句的which所指有些模糊，可以另起一句，簡(jiǎn)單的用 It can stably...描述） 3.Because all organic groups would be eliminated at this temperature [19], which facilitates the observation of the changes in UFD/SiO2 composites during heating process.（這句話本應(yīng)因果關(guān)系從句，后半句用which引導(dǎo)不合適。可以改為下面的說(shuō)法。另外，后半句的內(nèi)容我不能完全理解，我試圖按照我的理解給予修改，不知是否合適： Because all organic groups would be eliminated at this temperature [19], 【the observed changes in UFD/SiO2 composites during heating process was facilitated.】 4.Almost no silica shell formed on the surfaces of the UFDs with the 【addition of 0.5 ml ammonia】. 我覺得這句話改成下面的樣子更好些： 4.Almost no silica shell formed on the surfaces of the UFDs 【was observed】 with the 【addition of 0.5 ml ammonia】 |
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Because all organic groups would be eliminated at this temperature [19], which facilitates the observation of the changes in UFD/SiO2 composites during heating process. 其他幾個(gè)提的意見都很好，這句話我想表達(dá)的本意是：由于所有的官能團(tuán)在這個(gè)溫度被除掉，這利于對(duì)UFD/SiO2 composites 在加熱過程中發(fā)生的變化進(jìn)行觀察。 那么后面這半句怎么改合適呢 |
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